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Innocence - a peck on the cheek and holding hands. Dressed in Mayberry white, snow pearl in France, Anna stands out at the Eiffel tower. At first tongue, oh the tangle embrace. Anna’s falling for a Parisian accent; as a poet says Where should it be placed? Oui! Oui! He has a golden tongue. She’s falling for his charm. Innocence- a peck on the cheek and holding hands. Marcel holds her hand. Marcel pecks her cheek. Marcel, her first love. Starry-eyed as he makes for her lips. Sexy comes unaccented. She’s meant to be kissed. He parts her lips with gentleness; with the reverence of a rolling “r,” she’s frenched. Her knees lose their grip. Woozy with electric stars, Anna lights up the lady of iron.* 8/27/2021 Anna and the French Kiss Sponsor: Mystic Rose *Iron Lady - nickname for the Eiffel Tower The tower lights up at night.

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Date: 9/12/2021 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun~~story/write. "Love It" Have a blessed day.....................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/12/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 9/11/2021 1:44:00 PM
charming ~ congrats on your win, Kim ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/11/2021 3:01:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 8/28/2021 11:23:00 PM
Been there but haven't done that, but reading this gem, is the next best thing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2021 10:54:00 AM
A long time ago, I had my first kiss. Fun to write for this contest.
Date: 8/28/2021 7:23:00 PM
Fun one! Love that last stanza there. ~ Woozy in Chicago
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/29/2021 10:53:00 AM
:) Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 8/28/2021 12:53:00 PM
Lost in translation Kim, but the Kiss needs no words, especially those french ones, tasty indeed, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2021 5:29:00 PM
Thanks, David! :)
Date: 8/28/2021 7:17:00 AM
Aw so romantic Kim... Last line.. "Woozy with electric stars, Anna lights up the lady of iron.. "... Loved it... Best wishes and hugs... ~ Ani
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thank you, Anitha!
Date: 8/28/2021 1:25:00 AM
I loved this poem. So well constructed. Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/28/2021 4:18:00 AM
Thank you so much!
Date: 8/27/2021 5:14:00 PM
Love how you crafted this write Kim, Nicely done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/27/2021 6:27:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!

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