Anna

Her only fear 
hides in the fridge 
calorie after calorie 
of pure evil 

Her only salvation 
lies in the gym 
treadmill after treadmill 
of pure bliss

Her only tear 
cried in the dark
drop after drop 
of pure misery 

Her only friend
inside her head 
word after word
of pure torment 

Her only relief
stares back in the mirror
image after image 
of pure disbelief  

Her only proof
can be read on the scales
pound after pound 
of pure evidence

Her only savior 
the thing she fears most 
bite after bite 
of food

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/11/2009 11:52:00 AM
yes kevin i understand it goes deeper than this and all of my poems represent my life experiences and this is an issue which has closely affected me and therefore felt i should write about it as this illness affects so many people love, amy-eve
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Date: 11/10/2009 6:43:00 PM
this is so meaningful amy, good write. i dont know if u know this but it goes deeper then what u may think. but nice job... dont forget to read some of my poems for they are dear to me
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Date: 11/3/2009 10:48:00 AM
there is a deeper issue linked with this poem john it is not just about someone who cannot resist food (temptation) but about a mental illness which not many people understand love,amy-eve
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Date: 10/31/2009 9:30:00 PM
Great work. There are many of us and I'm sure there will be more who connect with this. We all ought to print this and affix it to out refrigerators. I'm reading on. ~<><
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:15:00 AM
thanks again james .. love,amy-eve
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Date: 10/31/2009 5:05:00 AM
Oooo, the dreaded fridge Amy, will power has to play it's course - if not it's the scales of justice >> nice read >> James
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