Animating Innate Vibrance

Between the pulse of our heartbeat simply present head- heart linking dwelling in time with stretched blissful peace awareness became unblinking.
Between heaven and earth the ethereal pulse of God's creation sifting through the soul like a fluttering kite in motion Here we are in a dwelling place of quarrel and demolition only peace can assuage the heart and give it, its contrition In the middle of war stretched across landscape of your heart "The Lord's prayer," in a lilting whisper, you got this to an art Give us today our daily bread and help us to do our part, it is only love agape that gives our soul a fresh new start Connecting spaces of our head-heart connection a mantelpiece decorated with meditative awareness and unblinking utter peace "Lead Us Not Into Temptation" let me decrease as you increase seed and bloom inside my heart and help me fold this crease Side by side two strong bookends holding together what rends with a soulful melodic vibration I arrive at every bend "May Thy Kingdom Come" and live within me til the very end side by side, ... like two old reliable and sturdy bookends.

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Date: 11/29/2024 9:40:00 AM
Dear Rose, soulful poetess, I adore how your wove verses of The Lord's Prayer into the heart of your precious poem. I especially loved ""Lead Us Not Into Temptation" let me decrease as you increase/seed and bloom inside my heart" - there is such beauty in the spirit of humility. Splendid spiritual poetry! Congratulations for your success in Seeker's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/29/2024 7:16:00 PM
Thank you dear Susan, glad you enjoyed the poem dear
Date: 10/25/2024 10:15:00 AM
"let me decrease as you increase seed and bloom inside my heart" -- Love that! "Lead us not into temptation" -- God created us freewill beings. He responds to us according to our conscious and unconscious declarations. The previous statement is the key to understanding: "as we forgive those who trespass against us" -- we are giving God control to intercede, asking that he keep us from revengeful thoughts and considerations. We are acknowledging our weaknesses and acknowledging our desire that He should lead. Let our higher self, the God of our perfectly evolved being take total dominion. The lessening of the lesser self. And the awakening of the all perfect God within us -- who we are one with, indivisible when fully evolved.
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Date: 10/25/2024 6:29:00 PM
wow Joe, thank you so much for this in depth comment, it means so much, and I totally agree with you, we are indivisible when fully evolved and close to God Almighty !
Date: 10/25/2024 3:53:00 AM
Ohhh woww what a beautiful, philosophically rich and spiritual poem you've woven, dear sweet Rose! I absolutely adore how you play with words whilst painting a meditative atmosphere for the readers with your soothing descriptions. I love everything about this piece but especially these lines really caught the attention of my soul ~ "decorated with meditative awareness and unblinking utter peace", "seed and bloom inside my heart and help me fold this crease" Such a heart-touching write ~ sending you light and best wishes always!
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Date: 10/25/2024 5:14:00 AM
Your comment in itself is a rich tapestry intricately woven, and such an inspiration to read Hiya dear. May God keep you safe in His loving embrace :)
Date: 10/24/2024 11:41:00 AM
Your poem reflects a spiritual journey, cantering on themes of faith, prayer, and inner peace amidst the struggles of life. It artfully blends religious imagery with heartfelt introspection, guiding the reader through a contemplation of the human condition, the power of prayer, and the pursuit of spiritual alignment.
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Date: 10/24/2024 3:31:00 PM
Your comments are always filled with insight and profound thought S, I appreciate you :)
Date: 10/24/2024 11:07:00 AM
Dear rose, this is such a profound poem so well woven with excellent rhymes , flowing in cadence! I love how youv especially written “ Connecting spaces of our head-heart connection a mantelpiece decorated with meditative awareness and unblinking utter peace“ such a soulfully heartfelt poem! I think will do well. Best wishes. Sending you light always
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Date: 10/24/2024 3:31:00 PM
I appreciate you and your beautiful time efforted comment, always a pleasure dipping in your ink, you are blessed !
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