Animal Antics

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Stretching and lowering their head submissively
Two tiger cubs in a fun frolic play and kittens yowl
Actively under trees, limbs, and leaf brushes passivity
Hugs, scratches, bites, and tiger growls 

Along comes a black heart face gibbon 
Swinging from branch to branch in high-speed
 No tail, arms as long as his body like ribbons
Teasing he joins in “You can’t catch me!  Yes indeed!”
 
Swinging from branch to branch in high- speed
Reaching for the cubs as fast as he could
He pulls their ears and pulls their tail to take heed
Can't seem to get enough of play since he began

The cubs jump and stretch and extended their claws
With all their efforts falling back to the ground with no avail 
They suck and draw breath playing hide-seek to get their jaws
on the gibbon. From behind, the gibbon stood on the ground and pulled their tails 

They turned and chased as fast as they could and failed
Worn out conveying a lack of interest they walked away 

Swinging from branch to branch in high-speed he stopped and inhaled
“Where are you going?he wailed.I’m not done playing? Come back to play another day. “


9/9/2016 

Animal Antics - Poetry Contest 
  
 Sponsored by: Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/23/2016 6:03:00 PM
Very creative poem, Eve. Congrats on your placement. Well deserved.
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Date: 9/19/2016 5:29:00 PM
Your Animal Antic Poem was awesome, creative and unique..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2016 4:06:00 PM
This is a great 'animal antics' poem, Eve. I could see the action through your very descriptive words. Congratulations on your fine placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/18/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sandra, I'm tickled it won.. Hugs
Date: 9/18/2016 4:00:00 PM
Eve! too cute! loved this one Congratulations on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/18/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thank you, Larua, yours was wonderful I'll see you tomorrow.. hehe Hugs
Date: 9/11/2016 10:02:00 AM
A playful write that "pulls their ears and pulls their tail" –– Bravo Poet!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/18/2016 9:34:00 PM
Thank you , Dah.
Date: 9/11/2016 6:29:00 AM
Seeing animals play reminds us we should also be playful in life. Good luck.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2016 9:23:00 AM
Awe.. yes. Hugs
Date: 9/10/2016 10:10:00 AM
this is very cute, Eve. Enjoyed it and the illustrations that go with it. I hope you are having a lovely week and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/10/2016 9:49:00 AM
Ha ha..Thats so cute... I have seen this and it's fun watching them..Good luck in the contest....
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Date: 9/10/2016 8:04:00 AM
- An adorable poem, Eve .... (Thursday, this week it was born 6 puppies here with me :) - Plenty to play with when they get a little bigger - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2016 9:24:00 AM
You and your family will be enjoying the romping around Hugs
Date: 9/10/2016 7:41:00 AM
Very cute Eve!:)-luloo
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