Angst of Chores

how strange, i was just reading and about to comment on this when your comment came in on mine, an overlapping of minds haha anyway, i like this quirky tanka, especially the alliteration :)

Truly a masterful composition. I extend my gratitude for the exquisite poem, adorned with profound musings and a striking concluding verse. The prospect of commencing a similar endeavor fills me with trepidation, as this piece encapsulates a remarkable vignette of existence.

I think I am a nator when it comes to housework. You know procrastinator. I enjoyed reading your work. If only those jobs would stay done. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

I can so relate to this Kim! I feel so good when it is done but dread getting started! This one is a great little slice of life, well done xxoo

Basically my daily life. Great one, Kim. Good to read yours again :)

get-r-done is what they say.

I can relate to this. A very creative take on it!

I hate chores, by the way . It's actually painful to me to have to do them because my nervous system is more relaxed when I am lying down or with my back pressed to the back of a chair. I would give anything to go back to hating them but at least able to do them all and do them well!! Sure wish I were a rich lady to hire cleaning people!!

This reminds me kind of a cinquain or whatever it's called, where you do one thing on a few lines and then its contrasting item at the end. Very nice.

Well said Kim. Then we must get up the next day and start those chores again.