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Angry Words

the angry words never stop like a nail gun the resentment seeps like a toxic fume between us god I can't breathe at all you follow me berating and hollow about the house demanding more more more theres nothing I can say that has not been said I'd rather slap you down the stairs instead but I go outside and stand it the field until it passes and you are inside on the computer game where you live now. *For Kerry

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Date: 7/25/2009 6:37:00 PM
actually it was a different game, and a dear friend that was enduring this humiliation - dragon realm. These poems are for him. I know some kids in my sons' dorms have failed out of school over World of Warcraft. Not much better!
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Date: 7/24/2009 8:44:00 PM
tell me it's not World of Warcraft. I've seen that game destroy relationships completely, where the guy decides he'd rather live in the virtual world and ends up neglecting every possible real world responsibility he's ever had, right down to feeding and clothing himself. you're right though, there's not much more you can say, but you can definitely pin point whether or not he wants to listen. I hope things are ok now...thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/24/2009 1:43:00 PM
wow.very powerfull.thanks for commenting my poems.i have alot more from my recent ex but i don't know if i am going to put them on here
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