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Angry Wasp

Pierced like a hot poker chip plunging hard to the bone. The angry wasp escapes and I’m left with his lance in my stubby forefinger. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey First Place Winner ~ "Feel The Feeling” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Paula Swanson May 25, 2010

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Date: 6/14/2010 1:00:00 PM
Ouch!! lol I can feel why this one won the contest. Well done! ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 5/30/2010 2:51:00 PM
My congratulations on your well-deserved Ist Place win, Caryl!! Enjoy your success and this "hurts", even to read!!! Great imagery here! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 5/29/2010 9:20:00 PM
good one, Caryl, Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Paula's " Feel The Feelings" contest Caryl. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/26/2010 5:38:00 PM
Eek! I love the lines "left with his lance in my stubby forefinger" - A well deserved win!
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:28:00 AM
Excellent!!!! Ouch...I can feel the sting....but hope you are feeling the glory!!!! Well deserved!! :) Congratulations on this great poem!!
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Date: 5/26/2010 7:19:00 AM
nice win my friend, great write
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Date: 5/25/2010 8:17:00 PM
Youchy! Poor finger! Congrats on your first place win with this stinger of a write, Caryl--yay for you! :)
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Date: 5/25/2010 7:22:00 PM
Big congrats Caryl on your 1st place win in the Feel the Feelings contest.. awesome as I commented before .. enjoy your big win.. that wasp has some good after all.. luv.. Linda-Marie.
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Date: 5/25/2010 6:34:00 PM
Very creative spin on this contest. Pure genius. Congrats on your well deserved win. Joe
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Date: 5/25/2010 4:03:00 PM
Ouch! I can really FEEL the sting of this write. Excellent poem and unique choice for the contest. Wishing you success, Caryl. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/25/2010 3:55:00 PM
Another excellent entry for the contest and I could feel the pain.. lots of wasps in N.J..... good luck... my entry is "Passion's Magic Moment"..luv.. Linda-Marie
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