Angry Skies

the thunder roared
like an angry lion
the lightning bursts into
a perfusion of colors
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Ahmad Avatar
December 1, 2008 at 4:20 AM
an amazing piece of work. this is indeed a great work :) keep writing and keep sharing things with us, u r very talented white :) keep rocking ! Love and peace.AMAAN!
Yamin Avatar
November 9, 2008 at 12:44 PM
Your canvas of mind has produced an exhilerating Light Poetry -a remarkable painting of words. A beauiful write. Thanks for your rich and thoughtful comments on my poem Obstinate Heart.
Higgins Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 10:42 AM
Beautiful write my dear. This is bright and very colorful. Keep up the good work Deneen. Love, Chris.
Mc Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 7:23 AM
LIKED THE IMAGERY! GOOD TITLE TOO. THIS COULD GO ON A MAGNET!! COOL!
Winter Avatar
November 6, 2008 at 5:35 AM
A well written vision of nature. I love storms. You have excellent imagery here. Love, shar
Pig Knuckles Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 10:06 PM
Deneen, I really enjoy your wonderful imagination and your creative style when you compose to present your readers with such a vivid image. You are a very gifted artist as I applaud you for a job well done... MPK
Reynolds Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 6:34 PM
a beautiful poem of color and sound - real. love Kristin
Torres Avatar
November 5, 2008 at 3:52 PM
So vivid and explosive. Wow great write. God bless Michael Torres thanks for your caring comments.
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