Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Poet Rhyme

Angry Man

An Angry Man
I am an angry man, and there is nothing I can do
I am sick to death of everything and that includes you too
You leave your make-up everywhere, like a prostitutes den
And yes I know what that looks like; I’ve been in one of them.
Your clothes you leave everywhere…
Its’ supposed to be men that don’t care
I’m sick of it, its time to go
Just leave your key and don’t be slow.
I never should have let you in
All I learnt was perpetual sin.
Be gone and get lost give me a break
Darken my step no more for heavens sake
I won’t be responsible what I do to you
If you stick your nose in my life anew.
© 25/06/2012

Entry for contest Unease.
Sponsored by: Paula Swanson

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Harry Horsman November 10, 2012 at 5:14 AM I Wonder? powerful and yes the anger comes through, which only a awesome poet can do, remines me of a poem, called Swan Song, that too being a heartbreaker...

Sara Kendrick July 18, 2012 at 1:41 PM Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck in Paula's competition..I have a son who says he is always saying that to women..They come and they go..He is the common denominator of the situation though..Sara

Keith Bickerstaffe June 27, 2012 at 3:13 PM WHEW!!! I got your message loud and clear! Beautifully crafted, with neat couplet rhyming and flow. Well done, Mandy!! Best wishes, Keith

Nette Onclaud June 27, 2012 at 7:42 AM riveting work... your wrath is well expressed, mandy!.. well done!..:) huggs!

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2012 at 7:43 PM Now this would make ya uneasy having that guy talking like that to you. Very interesting take on the contest, Mandy. I really loved reading this.

Debbie Guzzi June 25, 2012 at 11:40 AM POWERFUL..I am woman hear me roar!! Light & Love

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet June 25, 2012 at 10:13 AM DIRECT AND POWERFUL... WINING WISHES... Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 25, 2012 at 10:58 AM Thanks Elliott xx

Terry O'Leary June 25, 2012 at 9:15 AM Wow... talk about 'angry'! I hope this is only 'just a thought' from your vivid imagination... ;-) Terry Mandy Tams The Golden Girl June 25, 2012 at 10:58 AM imagination yes, the clue being I am a girl ha ha xx

Joseph May June 25, 2012 at 8:29 AM nice write Mandy... check out Elliott Bowe's blog called Poetry Battle for all the details and links.... always ...Joseph

Richard Palmer June 25, 2012 at 8:25 AM lol,a woman that doesn't take care of herself will never be able to take care of her surrounding or you,great write GG