Angry Little Foal

Angry little foal

Anger deep seeded in the soul
Giving birth to its nasty little foal 
 Kicking and bucking making a fuss 
 Judging everyone no one he trusts 
 I will show you how it is done 
 Ha! Ha! thinks he has won 
Proudly he gallops and puts on a display 
Shouting out I am the victor today 
 He laughs and says you cannot win! 
 I will show up again and again 
You can't stop me I'm too quick 
 Just try Tick- Tick- Tick- 
Ahh oh I think he’s going to explode?!!
Remember I own you and will not let you go
Not so fast, you nasty little foal 
 I am the master of this soul
 Pick up your cross and follow me 
 Because I am the One who will set you free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 11:21 PM
Decently descriptive write with some appropriate rhyming. The use of a "foal" proves to be a good metaphor.
Soares-Anselmi Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 11:31 PM
Thank you
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