Angry Forest

With sharpened twig and jagged rock 
the forest banded together to block
to block this intruder this maker of things
this creator of death that humankind brings
Rain drummed down the dancing trees
their war chants roused a wilder breeze 
The man sat in a house of dead wood
safe in a meadow where forest once stood
was he really unaware of the forest's ire
or protecting himself by adding logs to his fire.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/27/2014 6:50:00 AM
Congratulations on the win with this wonderful write on nature, Luann
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:39:00 PM
I love your take Luann...If we don't take notice our forest will be barren...congrats on the win...hugs Tim
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Date: 5/25/2014 12:44:00 PM
Luann,, Congratulations, I hope you enjoy your win and placement. Stop by my blog, "Petals in the Wind" if you like. Have a sweet Sunday.... XOX~ Linda
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Date: 5/20/2014 9:46:00 PM
VERY nice..You have some wonderful phrases here..I enjoyed. BG
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Luann Pfost
Date: 5/21/2014 2:22:00 PM
thank you so much for your comment
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