Angry Eyes

Angry eyes spray the rising flames of raging fire
Caustic words prick, the blare of voice doesn’t tire
Hapless relationship worn in grip of distress burn
Dismay drives the mind away, it doesn’t return.

If remorse could dowse the fire, make cold tear
Scorched heart drenched, the smoke would clear
Love regained, with tear it would blend in the eyes
With the ashes in the wind a new mind would rise.

October 12, 2017.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Hamilton Avatar
November 30, 2017 at 10:52 PM
Congrats Subimal on a fine write and congrats on a great win!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 1, 2017 at 12:22 AM
Thank you, John.
Ashley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 7:06 PM
A lovely write Subimal in it's passionate heartfelt anger at love lost. Enjoyed!
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 10:19 PM
Thank you, Susan for your encouraging comments.
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