Anger - Septolet

yelling and screaming

     words hurled

          in anger


tempers flare

     damaged pride

           feelings so

                  hurt









15/07/2011
by Francine Roberts for Dr. Ram Mehta's septolet contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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B Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 3:00 PM
Congrats on the win, excellent poem. Sums up about how I feel lately. Captures the emotion succinctly.
Brown Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 11:51 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Francine. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:41 AM
Many congratulations, Francine : )
George   Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:53 AM
Powerful Septolet, Francine. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie
Williams Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 1:00 AM
congrats Francine, David
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:56 PM
power-packed, dear francine...loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:56 PM
Congratulations on your win, Francine. You addressed a good topic.
Susan Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 4:38 PM
congratulations on your win!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Francine knew this piece would deliver worthy congrats to u my friend.. awesome one ..enjoy with luv..
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Congrats..Sara
Mehta Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 2:55 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Francine
Kendrick Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:33 AM
Reads like a winner for it aptly describes the topic..Good luck ...I am sure Dr. Ram will like this one..Thanks for stopping by and letting me know that I placed in your contest..It is an honor to be so considered..Thanks ..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:50 PM
Yes, this is so true. I see you are really liking these septolets. I think I saw you posted others. Let me go see.
Johnson Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 7:47 PM
like a slap from 5 finger falanges? ooh Francine, you de best, xo, Don
Mehta Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 6:34 PM
Thanks for the entry, Francine
Sweetheart Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 3:38 PM
oh wow Francine this is a good one my friend.. amazing insight into anger.. my hubby is so guilty of this bad temper and I have taken a fly swatter to him lately..haha.. it has woken him up a bit luv.. good luck in the contest .. if only we counted to ten .. like we all used to .. luv.. haha..worked..
Onclaud Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 3:03 PM
francine, a raw beautiful write.. is this your choice for the contest?? winning huggs! :) nette
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