Regina Mcintosh Poet Rhyme

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Angel's Wish

                        In the quiet, where her heart felt
            Music flowing through her, stirring
Visions and verses, vibrant svelte
Gentling wings, wildly recurring
                        Wonderful held her, uplifting
Brilliant as sunlight, yet drifting
Beyond the shores, blue seas shifting
      Essential peace, bringing such ease
            Smiling in dreams who melt the freeze
                        Joys alive, trembling in the breeze
Hopes falling like rains nature dealt
            Faithful prayers, shadows blurring
      Silence blends with love for gifting
            Wistful stars, night falls to its knees




Fragmented Rhyme Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Emile Pinet
February 7, 2023

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Susan Ashley March 2, 2023 at 8:06 AM Dear Gina, I am enthralled by the beauty, serenity and lovely alliteration of your exquisite poem ("Visions and verses, vibrant svelte"- amazing!). Soft yet breathtaking imagery feels like a poetic lullaby for the soul. Congratulations for your excellent win in Emile's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Mahtab Bangalee March 1, 2023 at 9:27 PM fantastic to read; congrats on the placement

Linda Alice Fowler March 1, 2023 at 1:20 PM Fabulous writing Gina. A beautiful wish! Congratulations on your win! :)

Emile Pinet March 1, 2023 at 9:46 AM Congratulations Regina! Your amazing poem "Angel's Wish", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily rose to a podium placing. Very well done my friend, Emile.