Angel's Wish

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In the quiet, where her heart felt Music flowing through her, stirring Visions and verses, vibrant svelte Gentling wings, wildly recurring Wonderful held her, uplifting Brilliant as sunlight, yet drifting Beyond the shores, blue seas shifting Essential peace, bringing such ease Smiling in dreams who melt the freeze Joys alive, trembling in the breeze Hopes falling like rains nature dealt Faithful prayers, shadows blurring Silence blends with love for gifting Wistful stars, night falls to its knees Fragmented Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Emile Pinet February 7, 2023

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Susan Ashley

Date: 3/2/2023 8:06:00 AM

Dear Gina, I am enthralled by the beauty, serenity and lovely alliteration of your exquisite poem ("Visions and verses, vibrant svelte"- amazing!). Soft yet breathtaking imagery feels like a poetic lullaby for the soul. Congratulations for your excellent win in Emile's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs, my sweet friend.. ~Susan

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 3/1/2023 9:27:00 PM

fantastic to read; congrats on the placement

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/1/2023 1:20:00 PM

Fabulous writing Gina. A beautiful wish! Congratulations on your win! :)

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/1/2023 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations Regina! Your amazing poem "Angel's Wish", has earned you a distinguished placement in my poetry contest. I was strict, but your poem easily rose to a podium placing. Very well done my friend, Emile.