Angels Weeping

The angels danced the day you were born, now in your memory they mourn. November 12, 2016
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Gentry Avatar
April 5, 2018 at 9:30 AM
Am checking out crystalline form. This is absolutely beautiful.
Wolf Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 6:20 AM
This is simply stunning Laura, and can you enlighten me on the crystalline form? Does the first line have to be 9 syllables and the 2nd 8! Or can it be the other way around too? Just wondering for mine, (First attempt) Thanks.
Daniel Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 5:30 AM
Very beautifully written, Laura:)
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