Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Lyric

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Angel's Touch

ANGEL'S TOUCH

Did you ever stop to think,
What this angel's touch really mean?

Smiling at you at a flower's blush
Giving you the time to think and hush
When you wanted a melody to hear
She sang you a song in joyous tears

When you badly needed determination;
She is ready to give you inspiration
When only a joke could make you smile; 
She flashed it to you in shortest mile

When you wanted a game to play;
She partnered with you in gay
When only an hour you swore to spend; 
She wants to be with you until the end

When strings of thorns are poured upon you; 
With arms wide open, she welcomed you
She comforted and gave you might
All these all she did with heartfelt delight

Now, I ask you...
Have you ever felt the touch of an angel?

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Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux
Contest Name: Beginnings Matter
Placed 2nd


©O. E. Guillermo
2:39 am, June 30, 2013

***my first ever poem @ fifth grade elementary.. :D? I was nervous when I posted but am excited and thrilled to see, how many reads it will get and the comments.. :)

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Abdullah Alhemaidy January 14, 2016 at 8:36 AM Lovely!

Kelly Deschler March 11, 2015 at 9:35 PM Any elementary school student who can write like this is extraordinary!... Your first poem is a great introduction to the beautiful poetry we would come to enjoy so much. Congrats on the win, Olive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 21, 2015 at 2:39 AM Thanks much Kelly.. :) I am humbled by your comment.. i so wish to inspire more.. :)! like you do.. :D!

Poet Destroyer A March 8, 2015 at 12:45 PM Olive O', Congratulations, on your fine win. <3 LINDA <3 Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 10, 2015 at 8:40 AM Thanks much Lolly Linda.. :D!

Skat A March 5, 2015 at 10:21 PM Olive, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Beginnings Matter Win ~SKAT~

Charlotte Puddifoot March 5, 2015 at 4:10 PM this is such a lovely piece, and seems so fitting for you somehow, showing your sweet soul - congrats on your win :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 10, 2015 at 8:39 AM Thanks much Charlotte.. :)! God bless you always.. :)!

Paul Callus March 5, 2015 at 3:56 AM Congratulations on a lovely win, Olive_eloi!! I'm sure I read this beauty before, but can't remember whether I commented or not. Your first poem on Soup made a hit at the word go!! Since then you have never looked back...well done. Hugs // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 6, 2015 at 7:22 AM you didn't leave.. :) but its okei no worries... :)! thanks much Paul.. :D!

Mark Trichet March 5, 2015 at 12:36 AM This is a tremendous first write Olive! I have now been touched by an angel... Congrats and hugs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 6, 2015 at 7:21 AM thank you Mark.. I read yours too wonderful. :)!

Jan Allison March 4, 2015 at 2:38 PM You are an angel how has touched so many lives in your work Olive - think this is a perfect write for you first poem:-) Congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 6, 2015 at 7:18 AM thank you Jan.. :) I am touched by you also.. :)

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty November 5, 2014 at 9:07 AM Yes,your poem. Angelic Olive,Love.......rajat Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 3, 2015 at 2:13 AM thanks Rajat.. :)

James Fraser October 13, 2014 at 2:19 PM I've not felt the touch of an angel, I've sensed one whom knows who they are. Maybe one day I'll touch her, and then I'll know I've touched one. Lovely poetry Olive, James........ James Fraser January 8, 2015 at 11:58 AM Isn't Halo such a lovely word. I think I've met an Angel, and I feel very soon in my life I shall touch an Angel :)x Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser October 14, 2014 at 9:05 AM :) maybe just maybe.. :) o consider each one who enters in my life angels eso those who have been selflessly with me ..

Keith Merritt August 10, 2014 at 11:22 PM Yes, I have felt the touch of an angel. her name is Olive and I am blessed every time I read a poem of yours. Thank you, dear ! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser August 13, 2014 at 6:29 PM Thanks much Keith..:)

Casarah Nance June 23, 2014 at 6:11 PM Hey girl, Wow what wise words from a fifth grade you, and you have kept growing and getting real good, I am glad to read you poetry you are a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day, you brighten up my world girl :) :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 24, 2014 at 5:19 PM Thank you very much Casarah,.. :0 I appreciate your continuous support to me.. :)

Poet Destroyer A May 28, 2014 at 7:24 PM haha, you know why I am here... Olive, thank you for the comment on my comment...Linda

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2014 at 6:55 PM Hi Olive, are you going back in time...LOL... I got a notification from this poem... Hugs...Linda Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 28, 2014 at 4:04 PM hahaha yes LInda.. :) thanks really. :)

Arthur Vaso April 17, 2014 at 10:45 AM Wow, unbelievable, that's very very very good!! I said I will read some of your earlier ones, but that's really early!!!! :) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser April 17, 2014 at 3:02 PM :) thanks for the great comment Arthur.. :) hahha yes.. :) got a lot at home.. :) since I was in my early years lool.. though am still you though. :P really appreciate it. :) _ olive_eloi :)

Poet Tacito June 23, 2013 at 2:40 PM Your word flow is quite unique. Some intense questions are presented here. A very, very good ending. You do well with keeping the reader on edge, so to speak. :) Great job! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2014 at 1:31 PM Thanks much Drake.. :) really appreciate your comment.. :) though this is sososoosoosososo late thank you.. :( GBU and let it be known that you are one of my inspirations since I joined here.. :)

Poet Destroyer A June 22, 2013 at 11:58 AM Olive, , "Welcome to the poetry soup. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest -- I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer on this site. Please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Hoping to become a follower and a friend to your poems, and your persona. Thanks @-> LINDA <-@" Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2014 at 1:35 PM Thank you very much sweet LInda.. :) I realy appreciate your drop by..:) You have been my inspiration then.. :)

Skat A June 21, 2013 at 8:39 AM I like your poem Olive, great ending question... good luck in the angel contest. , Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 27, 2014 at 1:33 PM Thank you so much Skat.. :) really appreciate your welcome.. :) though this maybe late but i really thank you.. :) as like Drake you and LInda has been my first ever inspiration here.. :)