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Angel's Melody

The music must be played! The audience is waiting, to hear the Angel's Melody. A masterpiece, I tell you! That none have ever heard before A likeness to everything and nothing at all. The curtains go up, the audience is quiet and she is not there. The music sheet is torn to pieces! The only copy, and it lies beside the piano. A piece is missing! No one can complete it. No one can perfect it. It is a masterpiece! It is brilliance! It is incomplete! She is gone and with her...gone is the Angel's Melody

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 8/17/2013 10:48:00 PM
Hi TARRYN, CONGRATULATIONS on having your poem featured this week........ Love ~SKAT~ *
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Date: 8/17/2013 9:59:00 PM
i love the grip on this one once again... Tarryn,. Congratulations!!! It's nice to see your poem Featured on the soups Home Page, this past week :-) goodnight~ Luv* LINDA .
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Date: 8/14/2013 4:46:00 PM
Sad indeed Congrats on your featured poem ! Well done! Laura :)
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Date: 8/14/2013 8:37:00 AM
you got me hanging on the air just now, and yet i would do it over again gal,
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Date: 7/24/2013 10:10:00 AM
a very sad feeling when reading your poem. Tarryn, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT *
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Date: 7/24/2013 9:58:00 AM
Tarryn, wow... I felt something strong when reading this poem. I don't think all is lost. this is deep, and sad.. I know how incomplete life is when the music has been torn... -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/24/2013 4:52:00 AM
- Hello new member: Tarryn. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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