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Angels Danced On the Beach

Angels danced on the summer beach. The sun was bright and shining like a huge ball of fire the day we met. The blue waves were crashing on the soft sandy beach. Birds were singing a love song just for us. Would our new friendship turn into love and marriage or would we go our separate ways? Only time can tell a story for a lifetime. The pain and pillows full of tears. Yet a lifetime mixed with fun and laughs along the way. It was not easy growing through time and life as we fought to understand each other. Life has many twists and turns as the years go flying by. growing old together not what we expected time is gone like sand in an hour glass Date Written: 8-23-2019

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Date: 6/23/2024 12:02:00 PM
A lovley poem time does fly by fast A lovley ending and not just a whirlwind romace of summer. I like the story in this poem It makes me wish my mam could of stayed but i understand sometimes people have to go seperate ways. I was 13 when my mam left home. But i would never of wanted her or dad to be unhappy. It broke our hearts but we got through
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2024 12:13:00 PM
 Thanks for writing. Glad you enjoyed this write. I think you may also like 2 of my newer writes, Yesterday's Wishes & Time... Have a blessed day as you write away..................
Date: 8/26/2019 1:41:00 AM
yes...it is...time gone I mean. Grains of sand lost...I enjoyed this poem very much. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2019 10:00:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your note and for reading......
Date: 8/23/2019 8:12:00 PM
one never knows the depths of love until they travel the path...nice poem :) hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/24/2019 12:12:00 PM
Thanks for writing. You are so right, about traveling the path. It all seems so easy until one is walking the path. Hugs Back...........

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