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Angels Danced

Angels danced on the head of a pen. Too many to count, yet too few to achieve their goal. Redemption! Write one thousand times……”I must not laugh and talk in class.” Is laughter such an evil it must be punished? conversation a criminal offense? Alas, to the cloaked keepers of the unkempt peons it was an offense against the soul of heaven. So did the angels dance in silence – punished for the sin of being angels, of cherishing each others company. Slowly a darkness filled the room coating the silence in fear, denying the dance, separating the angels as a cloud of loneliness stilled their wings. the silence of wings in civil acquiescence a fluttering dream ©8/29/2019

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Date: 8/29/2019 3:43:00 PM
A little side giggle, a whisper or two amongst friends.
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Date: 8/29/2019 8:01:00 AM
Good one but of course we all know that too much chatter in the classroom is disturbing if one is trying to take a test, read some material or just study especially for a child with ADD. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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John Lawless
Date: 8/29/2019 8:07:00 AM
One high school classroom had a sign that read...."SILENCE IS GOLDEN, DUCT TAPE IS SILVER". When there is silence for the sake of silence it sniffles sponteneity. Thanks for reading and commenting Sara....always appreciated
Date: 8/29/2019 7:54:00 AM
Wow. Such a powerful poem... I like it very much. Prayers for you and your writing. Thanks.
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John Lawless
Date: 8/29/2019 8:08:00 AM
A mentor of mine always cautioned me "Beware, lest you entertain angels unaware". Thanks for stopping by Regina

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