Angels and Devils (Round Twelve)

Yes! I am the Angel on your shoulder,
And the Devil with his hand up your skirt.
The Angel asks you to take off your shirt,
Because the Devil is getting bolder.
The Angel has you bent like a folder.
The Devil teases you with his growth spirt,
As the Angel warns you that "this might hurt,"
Since the Devil's heart is getting colder.
On the outside, the Angel comforts you.
The Devil destroys you on the inside.
On the outside, the Angel remains true.
The Devil exposes himself, then hides.
When the Angel has nothing more to do,
The Devil proceeds to mount up, then ride.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Oh yes I see u and Sarah still going at it .. but in such a beautiful way..Angels and Demons now.. fine write.. as I commented on hers also.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii...on vacation...AlohA
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July 3, 2010 at 12:20 PM
I like the flow of this sonnet. It appears that the devil always has a thing or two up his sleeves. The images are right on point. Great job! Joseph
Hales Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 11:05 AM
Destroyer poet you say it all in your comments !!!! great title also how do I beat this one ha ha ha .... sarah x
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July 3, 2010 at 10:14 AM
nice one Doc. this is a masterpiece of seduction in an evil way... lol.. and good way.. love the second and fourth line,..p.d.
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