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Angels and Devils

Blue angels brave hello, in full command, swooshing overhead. Like the sun at twilight — so low, with hurricane force. Swift temptation tips cochlea — you must obey the dust devil’s thrust — the haboob hastens your smile reaction. 3/1/2018

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Date: 3/1/2018 8:34:00 PM
Very creative thinking, Kim in one of my fave forms, the etheree.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2018 8:36:00 PM
Thanks, sweet Andrea!
Date: 3/1/2018 12:53:00 PM
Nice cadence, well put together, fun to read. Good job, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/1/2018 8:07:00 PM
Thank you, Caren!

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