Angels and Devils

Blue
angels
brave hello,
in full command,
swooshing overhead.
Like the sun at twilight —
so low, with hurricane force.
Swift temptation tips cochlea —
you must obey the dust devil’s thrust —
the haboob hastens your smile reaction.

3/1/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:34 PM
Very creative thinking, Kim in one of my fave forms, the etheree.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:36 PM
Thanks, sweet Andrea!
Krutsinger Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 12:53 PM
Nice cadence, well put together, fun to read. Good job, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2018 at 8:07 PM
Thank you, Caren!
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