Zoe Lambert Poet Acrostic

Angels and Demons

Friends who;
     Always please you,
     Never forsake you 
     Goes with you
     Even to heaven or hell..!!
     Loves and cares for you
     Surely are positive
I call them ANGELS, and hang out with them...

Friends who;
     Doesn't love you,
     Even tend to cheat you
     May someday betray you
     Or treat you like garbage..!!
     Negative and foolish,
     Sometimes annoying
I call them DEMONS, and surely stay away....

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Adeleke Adeite June 11, 2009 at 10:28 AM who are you! laughs. keep writing baby! lol. Ady

James Marshall Goff June 10, 2009 at 1:24 PM Crystal, love the original structure of this fine write! good work! Jim

Jay Loveless June 5, 2009 at 11:06 AM Awesomly Done. I Do The Same Lol. My Friends Who Are Always There Are Life Rafts And Angels To Me. Peace Boo Boo

L'Nass Shango June 4, 2009 at 8:29 PM Ingeniously done ... great creativity ... let me applaud you for this esteemed accomplishment ... this is great poetry.

William Kershaw June 2, 2009 at 11:24 PM Crystal, nicely done. Only one point of critique. Those whom you call demons de facto and de jure couold never be called friends. I remain your devoted and admiring friend, Will