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Angels and Demons

Friends who; Always please you, Never forsake you Goes with you Even to heaven or hell..!! Loves and cares for you Surely are positive I call them ANGELS, and hang out with them... Friends who; Doesn't love you, Even tend to cheat you May someday betray you Or treat you like garbage..!! Negative and foolish, Sometimes annoying I call them DEMONS, and surely stay away....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/11/2009 10:28:00 AM
who are you! laughs. keep writing baby! lol. Ady
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Date: 6/10/2009 1:24:00 PM
Crystal, love the original structure of this fine write! good work! Jim
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Date: 6/5/2009 11:06:00 AM
Awesomly Done. I Do The Same Lol. My Friends Who Are Always There Are Life Rafts And Angels To Me. Peace Boo Boo
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Date: 6/4/2009 8:29:00 PM
Ingeniously done ... great creativity ... let me applaud you for this esteemed accomplishment ... this is great poetry.
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Date: 6/2/2009 11:24:00 PM
Crystal, nicely done. Only one point of critique. Those whom you call demons de facto and de jure couold never be called friends. I remain your devoted and admiring friend, Will
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