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Angels Among Us

Living on the edge, he searched high and low taking his chances with the fire down below Guided by the stars, he kept his fear at bay he fought his demons until one day he found his way Stuck in a living hell, she feared for her very life wondering why she became this monster’s wife Violently mistreated and beaten half to death she found the courage to leave before he took her last breath Abandoned and left all alone, never knowing why she wondered why her Mommy and Daddy had to say goodbye Bouncing around in Foster care in constant fear of the unknown she was taken in by a loving family and was no longer left alone When all seems lost, look for his guiding light it will find you there in your darkest of nights Some crosses are so heavy and hard to bear but he will send his angels and show that he cares. October 24, 2020 Five words: Angels, fire, abandoned, light and bear Mystery Word Find Contest Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 10/29/2020 2:00:00 PM
Nicely written Mark. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/30/2020 5:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda!
Date: 10/28/2020 1:04:00 PM
Absolutely Brilliant Mark 7 out of 7 Much better than my meager effort puts it into context In fact i would go as far as to say worthy of 1st place
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Date: 10/28/2020 1:59:00 PM
You are to kind, thank you very much Christopher! What a gracious comment, I’m glad you liked it.
Date: 10/27/2020 10:06:00 PM
Mark, you wove these words together so masterfully in your stories then summed them up in a statement of faith. Really well done, Mark! Congratulations on your win!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/28/2020 1:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot Sam! I certainly do appreciate such a nice comment!
Date: 10/27/2020 11:40:00 AM
Congratulations Mark Great inspirational write of hope. How are kids? Did Britanny get back his taste? Have a great day. Take care. Regards Rama
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/28/2020 1:57:00 PM
I will tell her that, thanks
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 10/28/2020 6:45:00 AM
It happens with my son everytime he has fever and every time he is given antibiotics. Goes away with time. My mother used to say pepper is very good for bringing back taste. You can try and see
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/27/2020 12:07:00 PM
They are both good now but she has not gotten back her taste yet. Thank you for asking!
Date: 10/27/2020 11:28:00 AM
Congrats on a fine poem and top win!!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/27/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank you Krish! I appreciate the visit
Date: 10/27/2020 8:50:00 AM
Mark, you did a great job incorporating the words into a gripping testimony of the protection of our guardian angels. I have experienced them more than once, and I am a believer! Well done, congrats on your win ~ John
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/27/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank you so much John! I appreciate your kind words
Date: 10/27/2020 8:17:00 AM
Yes. I agree and appreciate. Angels are among us to protect and guide. All the Best.
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/27/2020 12:05:00 PM
Thanks Anissa!
Date: 10/25/2020 1:42:00 AM
You composed this well Mark, a sad verse that you often hear about in real life. Tom
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2020 5:39:00 AM
I appreciate that Tom!!
Date: 10/24/2020 5:28:00 PM
a story that sadly is too common in this world today. I love how you saved the child!!
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Mark Koplin
Date: 10/25/2020 5:38:00 AM
Thanks Andrea!

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