Angels

The rain came down
It continued the whole day
Wind blew strong too
Beat against the house

More than hundred years old
The roof couldn't bear
It came down in slabs
On the second floor

It was in the middle of night
A family of four was  asleep
In the very second floor
All awoke and was stunned

The whole floor they found
Covered by massive debris
Only their room was unaffected
The rest was under the rubbish

As they were nervously coming down
A flash of light caught their eyes
Contour of a lovely face
With a raised palm of pink hope

It must be the Angel
Said the twelve year old girl
We love our neighbours
So she came to save us

The whole family agreed
As they looked on
The beauty travelling to the stars
By then the rain had stopped

The father told confidently
It was the Mother -- Mother Teresa
I too think so, said the mother
Their eyes on the residual light

Angel saves the family
Was the news in next day's daily
Most people said: Amen
A few laughed away too


September 7, 2017
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Salehi Avatar
September 13, 2017 at 2:04 PM
Beautiful... congratulations
Kimathi Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 12:15 PM
A deep, spiritually significant piece this is... Congrats Probir, for your well-deserved third placement in the contest! :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 10, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Wonderful write Probir, congratulations! xomo :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Wonderful poem, Probir. Miracles do happen ... ty for sharing that sentiment w/us. Kudos on your win. Stellar write. Love and joy always.
Barden Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 4:01 AM
What a wonderful and inspiring story, Probir - congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! Blessings! :-)
Kannan Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Great story... Congratulations on your win... Beautifully written...
Roper Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 3:32 PM
Congratulations on your win , Probir, wonderful verse. ~`*
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 3:14 PM
A wonderful story. I believe in what they saw. Congratulations on your win.
Ashley Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 2:39 PM
An excellently expressed poem Probir! Congratulations on your win with this lovely and evocative write. :)
Pandit Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 12:54 PM
Congrats Probir!
Trifiatis Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 7:25 AM
Fascinating dramatic story inspiring awe! Those who laughed are the ignorant ones my friend, Probir!
Pandit Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 5:36 AM
Good story Probir--well written--good luck for the contest!
Singh Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 12:58 AM
Such kindness will make one forget the divide over caste and creed.
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