Angels

Lenient light beings
Persistently beside one
Aware and secure

Acquaint themselves once
Nevermore in physical
But still their warmth counts

Coeval as I am
Complexities become plain
Chosen among few

Descend with desire
Defy death a countless times
Illumine spirit

Linger up below
Feeling within and beyond
Omnipresent glow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/12/2016 7:31:00 AM
Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I appreciate you reading my work and finding it worthy of being in the winners' list..Sara
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 4/12/2016 8:35:00 AM
You deserved the win Sara...keep going.
Date: 4/9/2016 1:51:00 PM
So wonderful Marvin - great inspiration for your contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 4/10/2016 9:06:00 PM
thanks great jan!
Date: 4/6/2016 3:32:00 PM
This is an excellent string of senryu, Marvin. Angels can be very inspiring. I believe in angels, and I am sure that many times they have pulled me out of tricky situations! ~ Regards // paul
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 4/6/2016 10:49:00 PM
Great Paul thanks! Yes I saw them once and always beside and above me.
Date: 4/5/2016 8:13:00 PM
They just have to be true, Marvin. I bet you will have many examples of them from your contest. Very nicely described here.
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 4/6/2016 4:52:00 AM
Thank you andrea the gttcreat!
Date: 4/5/2016 2:17:00 PM
Excellent in all the ways, A glorious Angel pictured. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 4/6/2016 4:51:00 AM
Thank you great BL!
Date: 3/21/2016 10:07:00 PM
awesome poem, Marvin. LINDA
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 3/28/2016 4:05:00 AM
Great thanks Linda!
Date: 1/15/2016 8:48:00 PM
well done.... you are a great poem...SKAT
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Marvin G. Celestial
Date: 3/28/2016 4:05:00 AM
Thanks SKAT!
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