Angels

Angels
are all around
they can be anything
holding your hand when life looks glum
when feeling  as though you want to give up
Many things changed when you passed on
alone, scared by myself
I will be your
Angel


By P.D~
Angels are among us~
walking side by side!
Giving us strength to believe in.
As the day draws close my breath is overwhelmed by beauty.
The beauty I find divine when it comes to our friendship''
I open my mind to the flight of your wings.
The fascinating way your innocence sings.
Hopefully you are that angle I lay my trust in too..


A collaboration with *Cory Long

~My collaboration contest~

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Gary Fields

May 1, 2012 at 12:43 PM

Very nicely done Cory...Keep the write^up^up! Happy reading again at the Soup! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Congratulation on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 21, 2011 at 12:12 PM

Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest Cory. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 17, 2011 at 9:13 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Cory

Michael J. Falotico

September 17, 2011 at 8:26 AM

Two great poets and wondeful forms.. love this write... and Congrats to you...always Michael

Caryl Ramsdale

September 17, 2011 at 3:29 AM

Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR

Sara Kendrick

September 16, 2011 at 8:27 PM

Congrats on your winning work..I knew that it was a winner for sure..Sara

Jack Horne

September 16, 2011 at 1:07 PM

Many congrats on all your wins, Cory : )

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 16, 2011 at 8:01 AM

congrats cory on a fabulous fourth place my friend with this beautiful collab with PD.. magnificent words ..u are an Angel luv..enjoy..

Poet Destroyer A

September 16, 2011 at 1:40 AM

Cory, Congratulations on your win.. angels i battle everyday... this was an honor,,, and joy... God bless,..p.d.

Cory Long

September 16, 2011 at 8:23 PM

pd I had so much fun writing this with you and hope to write many more.. cory

Carolyn Devonshire

August 8, 2011 at 10:29 PM

There definitely are angels among us, Cory. Some of them can be found right here on Poetry Soup. You did a great collaborative effort here and I wish you success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

August 8, 2011 at 12:01 AM

nice... i fixed the poem.. i felt silly after noticing the form. hi how are you.. I am glad your book is doing good.. i don't have much information on it... but the title.. i bet I would enjoy it.. have a nice one,..p.d.

Gary Fields

August 7, 2011 at 10:05 PM

And againg with XXDESTROYER Ms. Poet you have hit the spot! I do believe in Angle's...... Fore they are God's most innocent...some may seem them and some may not, but their daily work is never done, and time is not relavent. Great poem/keep the write-up,up! Your friend in the pen. G.FIELDS

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 4, 2011 at 10:06 PM

cory this turned out GREAT ..good luck in the contest as I just read it on PD's page too..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

August 4, 2011 at 5:03 PM

ooo... yes... lol... where is my part.... Hi Cory... you have to paste my part to... if you want to fix it cute and center it..go for it..OKAY.. i am on the soup right now. What is the name of the poem you wrote with Michael.. I will read it now... always..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

August 4, 2011 at 12:28 AM

Hey, you guys did really good with this one. I really love what you came up with, Cory!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 3, 2011 at 6:40 PM

will be back cory to read the finished product luv and good luck in the contest .. an amazing choice of themes...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

August 3, 2011 at 6:39 PM

oh how sweet is this one and I know my BFF PD will add her lines and it will totally shine like a diamond.. u know I collect Angels ..have almost 3000 inside and outside my home in N.J... awesome the peace u feel with them all around luv.. u are an Angel...