ANGELS

Angelic smile so innocent Neon soul glows within it Green growth day by day Emerald eyes in baby’s face Little lavender lighthearted laughs Smiles for miles always glad

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Jude Herrick

Date: 12/30/2023 5:13:00 AM

I love this acrostic, Karen. It reminds me of them being elementals of nature, innocence and joy. Messengers of the Lord.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/30/2023 5:28:00 AM

I appreciate you reading and happy you love it! Thanks Jude!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/23/2023 4:50:00 AM

Neon.. emerald.. lavender.. You've gorgeously used colours to describe those gentle hues innocence and mystique.. I really appreciate the flow of this sweet poem.. Beautifully done as an Acrostic for 'Angels'.. It's always such a delight to read your eloquent words, dear Karen, I enjoyed reading this :)

Karen Jones
Date: 12/30/2023 5:26:00 AM

Aw you are so kind Hiya! Thanks

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/22/2023 4:59:00 PM

a nicely done Acrostic, Karen. I liked 'neon souls' -- great imagery. I enjoyed the read, Sara

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 9:38:00 PM

Thanks Sara! Happy holidays.

Regina Elliott

Date: 12/22/2023 11:59:00 AM

Hi Karen, a very charming and innocent acrostic. Beautiful imagery. Have a wondrous and bright Christmas holiday! xx

Karen Jones
Date: 12/22/2023 12:23:00 PM

Thanks Regina. Have a happy holiday as well!