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Angelina Trinidad

Angel of my life, only woman I adore
Never will there be anyone that I could ever love more
Goddess of the earth, your beauty is timeless
Eternal flame of my heart, true love for you I profess
Lady so magnificent, please spare me some time
I promise to love you with a love that's sublime
Nefertiti is nothing compared to thee
Aphrodite is what you really are to me

True love from my heart I offer to you
Radiant beauty that makes my heart feel brand new
Immaculate angel, woman that I desire
No one else can put my soul on fire
In love with you I will forever stay
Darling even if you are millions of miles away
Angel I know you already answered another man's call
Death would be sweeter now because I can't have you at all

Copyright © John Boak | Year Posted 2008

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Joseph Spence Sr Date: 9/23/2008 1:41:00 PM This is just wonderful. The lines flow very well and I like the essence of the words. The last two lines of the first stanza are really icing on the cake and steel in a cement block. Great job! ~Joseph Login to Reply

Deneen White Date: 8/24/2008 8:23:00 PM wow what a great and sad write, so eloquently put it makes me say ahh, hopefully things will get better for you, take care D-nyce Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 8/16/2008 3:41:00 PM this was a beautiful piece you wrote, straight from the heart. enjoyed it. thank you for reading my Love faded away and for your comment. Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 8/16/2008 6:14:00 AM Hey to you! You are a true romantic, John.:) This poem speaks of your love, your loyalty, and your undying devotion to this 'Angel'. However, I don't believe that, "Death would be sweeter". We seem to come to this earth, for reasons unbeknown to us, but if we could view our lives like roadmaps, we might see that the path we are on is exactly the place where we ought to be. I always get more lost with roadmaps. :( Reading it right is the key. God bless you and yours, love to you, my friend, Mikki Login to Reply

P Sheart Date: 8/14/2008 8:50:00 AM Hello John This is so beautifully written. It's obvious you know what true love is. In it's balance we all want to hold on to it and never let it go....but, coming to turms with that isn't always easy. Sad but heartfelt ending, Like Romeo and Juliet. A true joy to read. Many blessings to you and yours. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia Login to Reply

Sharon Winter Date: 8/14/2008 6:19:00 AM Wow. Amazing acrostic. Many deep loves you must have experienced in your life. : ) This is full of passion and adoration with a heartbreaking ending. I am so looking forward to that narrative. Thanks for your thoughtful comments John. Love, Shar Login to Reply

Michael Jordan Date: 8/14/2008 2:42:00 AM John this is a very touching and sad poem - You have plenty of heart as this poem clearly shows - God Bles Login to Reply