Angelic Tunes

The harp can be heard, blending with the rain
Angelic tunes reach a shattered broken heart
Soothing every teardrop of treacherous pain
Piecing together facts that made it fall apart

Joy surpasses all the swirling pangs of hurt
Miraculous healing shines through the gray
As raindrops now trickle and the skies flirt
The sun comes out smiling, ready to play

6/13/18

*Entry for Angels in the rain Contest.  Sponsor:  Vermillion Scythe.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 9:22 AM
I love your last two lines! Lovely! GL! I just wrote mine!
Sands Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Thank you for the kind feedback Kim :)
Hoffman Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 4:35 PM
An wonderful uplifting write Heidi~Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 4:45 PM
Thank you Cheryl. I am happy to hear that! :)
Smith Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Lovely work Heidi, best wishes in the contest.
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Charlie :)
Gentile Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 1:45 PM
it does seem that the harp is medicinal, Heidi and your beautiful poem is aw well xxoo
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Mike :)
Pandit Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 12:54 PM
Beautiful tunes in your poem--enjoyed reading it..best for a win, Heidi.
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Thank you Vijay :)
Berggren Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:33 AM
A smile from another person can be like a ray of sunlight when the day is cloudy and gray in the heart. Your poem is so full of truth telling me joy can take away all the hurts the day may bring.
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 11:45 AM
Yes, Alfred. Thank you for your comment and feedback :)
May Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:30 AM
Very nicely penned Heidi
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you Joseph :)
Warrior Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:12 AM
Elegantly said, my dear friend...a winner is coming your way...L&L...^WW^
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:39 AM
Thank you WW! :)
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