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Angelic Tunes

The harp can be heard, blending with the rain Angelic tunes reach a shattered broken heart Soothing every teardrop of treacherous pain Piecing together facts that made it fall apart Joy surpasses all the swirling pangs of hurt Miraculous healing shines through the gray As raindrops now trickle and the skies flirt The sun comes out smiling, ready to play 6/13/18 *Entry for Angels in the rain Contest. Sponsor: Vermillion Scythe.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/14/2018 9:22:00 AM

I love your last two lines! Lovely! GL! I just wrote mine!

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/14/2018 9:29:00 AM

Thank you for the kind feedback Kim :)

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/13/2018 4:35:00 PM

An wonderful uplifting write Heidi~Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Cheryl. I am happy to hear that! :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/13/2018 2:09:00 PM

Lovely work Heidi, best wishes in the contest.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Charlie :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/13/2018 1:45:00 PM

it does seem that the harp is medicinal, Heidi and your beautiful poem is aw well xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Mike :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/13/2018 12:54:00 PM

Beautiful tunes in your poem--enjoyed reading it..best for a win, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 3:18:00 PM

Thank you Vijay :)

Alfred Berggren

Date: 6/13/2018 11:33:00 AM

A smile from another person can be like a ray of sunlight when the day is cloudy and gray in the heart. Your poem is so full of truth telling me joy can take away all the hurts the day may bring.

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 11:45:00 AM

Yes, Alfred. Thank you for your comment and feedback :)

Joseph May

Date: 6/13/2018 10:30:00 AM

Very nicely penned Heidi

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thank you Joseph :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/13/2018 10:12:00 AM

Elegantly said, my dear friend...a winner is coming your way...L&L...^WW^

Heidi Sands
Date: 6/13/2018 10:39:00 AM

Thank you WW! :)