Angelic Notes In the Rain

Angelic Notes in the Rain Heavenly harps in the rain, as melodic minstrels cascade Vibrations cast away the pain, as the air rings in their aid Symphonic strings sustain, for they do wash away our sins We celebrate and attain, for the harp’s healing thus begins Each note a soothing sage, washing away our fabled fear For we break away the cage and hold on to what is dear The rumbling rain has set the stage, for now, we are in tune As we turn the paradisal page, in this joyous month of June. June.13.2018 Angels In The Rain Sponsored by: Vermillion Scythe Placed 2'nd
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Gauthier Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 10:28 PM
Congrats on your top win, WW.
Gentry Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this beautiful poem. Powerfully exquisite!
Wolf Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 12:50 PM
Lovely, alliterative poem, W.W., a real joy. Kudos to you on your podium win in this especially competitive contest! Best wishes, Gershon
Smith Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 11:03 AM
Wonderful work WW, congratulations...
Scythe Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win in my contest! All the best to you, VS!
Salehi Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 3:28 AM
Indeed June the most joyous... guess who was born on June 10th... :)
Devonshire Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 6:30 PM
You received amazing inspiration for this contest, WW. I've red it several times and each line is like a brilliant monoku, but they all come together beautifully. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
Gauthier Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 10:06 AM
Lovely, WW. Well penned.
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Beautifully written WW! I love it :)
One Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 8:17 AM
You really have a great vocabulary and way with words...
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