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Angelic Kindness Happens

I was past low with no clue which way to go.
Thanksgiving was approaching and I did not 
know how to tell my son, with no show of woe,
that there would be no turkey for roasting.
I felt like an adult failure unworthy of a savior.

Never in my grown life had I known such strife.
My anxiety over money cut me like a knife.
On the morn I determined to tell my son,
an unexpected check came via the U.S. mail
and relief winds lifted my hopes into a sail.

Glee took me to my bank to make the deposit, 
then straight to shopping for our food closet.
At the checkout, my world crashed and burned
because my emotions were again angst-turned.
Card Declined –  cannot be, I must go see.
.
I could barely speak but did succeed to
ask the cashier to please watch my cart
while I drove for info my bank might depart.
I learned when your funds are a sad balance
banks are horribly strict and even callus.
I had little money so I could not have money
for five banking days.  I landed inside a haze,
felt sore all over, cried more and walked in a daze. 

With a heavy, dull heart, I drove back to my cart
so I could do right by my regular grocery store.
I wished to say sorry, explain why I was poor
and then return merchandise to its place.
The cashier listened with a smile on her face
and when she spoke, I was lifted by grace:

The woman who had stood behind me in line
had bought all in my cart and it was now mine.
I do not remember this stranger’s face,
but will lifelong be grateful for her kindness. 
Her praiseful, selfless embrace secured my
authentic place back among the faithful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodgers Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 10:12 AM
Dear CayCay, your lovely words carried so much raw honesty and heart, it drew me right into the struggle and then lifted me up with that breathtaking act of kindness at the end. It goes to show you how grace can show up in the most unexpected moments, and how deeply those gestures can change us. Truly moving and beautifully shared. Autumn Blessings, Dear CayCay, Daniel
Godwin Avatar
September 30, 2025 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Daniel. It is a story that will hopefully uplift all who read it. GOOD happens, it's just quieter than its opposite. Poetry hugs .... CayCay
Wolf Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 7:40 PM
Quiet act of heroic kindness... Great story, CayCay, and glad it's true. It is true, correct?
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 9:20 PM
Yepper doodle, true that. Maybe someday, somewhere the lady will read this. CayCay
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 6:17 PM
what a wonderfully inspirational story...brought tears to my eyes....such unselfishness and kindness...glad you had such a special experience, almost life altering.
Springs Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:44 PM
Your poem gives this act of kindness such a good context. Thanksgiving is so important - though I'm not American and my knowledge comes mainly from movies I think.
Theraven Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:43 PM
Hello Caycay, Well penned. This poem suits these times. Seems the divide between the have and have-nots has widened in recent years. The basic fundamentals of humanity remain hopeful. Maybe a prayer answered? -Richard
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:56 PM
Yes, a prayer answered, as He chooses to answer. I'd never been in that situation and haven't since but at the time that didn't matter. I spent a good 5 minutes or so today talking about the price of coffee, it's ******. (let's go with ludicrous.) Thank you so much for commenting, it's appreciated ... CayCay
Steinmetz Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:33 PM
That is truly kind! Thanks for sharing and beautifully written!
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:58 PM
Hi, Rachel. Love your pic, the pen, it's so appropriate, and it's also poetic. Indeed, a kind Samaritan as moved by God. A dark moment filled with light, and I have made sure to pass it on whenever I can. Thank you ... CayCay
Hind Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 4:31 PM
Sweet, beautiful, grateful- you made me get emotional, I could just see you there, but NOT emptyhanded....how sad it would have been for you and your son. Thank God. :) <3
Godwin Avatar
September 29, 2025 at 5:11 PM
Funds were tied up in recent divorce, unexpectedly lost job of 13 yrs (hostile bank takeover) and unemployment hadn't started yet so .. but it led to an encounter w/ an earth angel. Thanks, darling one. CayCay
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