Angela Maria

first gaze upon my child's cherubic face. . . knowing immortal love

Jan. 26, 2019 for the Heavenly Monoku Contest of Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 2/18/2019 5:11:00 AM
Great. I like this. My kids are all grown up now, but they are still little cherubs. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/2/2019 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful!! Love and bonding right from the very start after birth. Congratulations on a very deserved win, Andrea. Regards // paul
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Date: 1/31/2019 12:11:00 PM
Great inspirational Monoku, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve
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Date: 1/30/2019 8:18:00 PM
Congrats, Andrea, for this beautiful verse. I'm always delighted to see your name on the winner's list - Bob
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:09:00 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/30/2019 4:48:00 PM
The beauty that brings a mother’s love! Congrats on you win, Andrea!
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Date: 1/27/2019 1:56:00 PM
Beautiful monoku Andrea, Tom.
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Date: 1/27/2019 12:15:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful and so deep and heavenly !
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Date: 1/27/2019 9:32:00 AM
Lovely, best wishes...
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Date: 1/27/2019 5:52:00 AM
Great!
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Date: 1/27/2019 5:07:00 AM
ohh andie, a mother's love is almost unconditional and you have seized this truism through your monoku.. i used ' child' too in my entry!...this is a treasure!...huggs
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Date: 1/27/2019 4:49:00 AM
Beautiful Andrea, and a very powerful one liner!
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Date: 1/27/2019 2:08:00 AM
So true, Nothing like gazing into the eyes of your beloved child, to know immortality. and Yes I am mystic rose, I changed my name a while back, but I was trying to figure out how to change it back without losing my poems. Have a great day Andrea.
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Date: 1/27/2019 12:35:00 AM
That's so beautiful, I have to catch my breath, now! Purity, itself! Bravo!
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Date: 1/26/2019 8:35:00 PM
Hi Andrea, From one mother to another, this was just beautiful! Great entry for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/26/2019 8:30:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea.
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