Angela Maria

first gaze upon my child's cherubic face. . . knowing immortal love

Jan. 26, 2019 for the Heavenly Monoku Contest of Kim Rodrigues
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Neumann Avatar
February 18, 2019 at 5:11 AM
Great. I like this. My kids are all grown up now, but they are still little cherubs. Many wishes, Kai
Callus Avatar
February 2, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Beautiful!! Love and bonding right from the very start after birth. Congratulations on a very deserved win, Andrea. Regards // paul
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2019 at 12:11 PM
Great inspirational Monoku, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve
Hinshaw Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 8:18 PM
Congrats, Andrea, for this beautiful verse. I'm always delighted to see your name on the winner's list - Bob
Y. Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 6:09 PM
Hi Andrea, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 2nd place:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 4:48 PM
The beauty that brings a mother’s love! Congrats on you win, Andrea!
Cunningham Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 1:56 PM
Beautiful monoku Andrea, Tom.
La France Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 12:15 PM
Andrea, beautiful and so deep and heavenly !
Smith Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 9:32 AM
Lovely, best wishes...
Alhemaidy Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:52 AM
Great!
Onclaud Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 5:07 AM
ohh andie, a mother's love is almost unconditional and you have seized this truism through your monoku.. i used ' child' too in my entry!...this is a treasure!...huggs
Kitchin Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 4:49 AM
Beautiful Andrea, and a very powerful one liner!
Rose  Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 2:08 AM
So true, Nothing like gazing into the eyes of your beloved child, to know immortality. and Yes I am mystic rose, I changed my name a while back, but I was trying to figure out how to change it back without losing my poems. Have a great day Andrea.
Fairchild Avatar
January 27, 2019 at 12:35 AM
That's so beautiful, I have to catch my breath, now! Purity, itself! Bravo!
Y. Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 8:35 PM
Hi Andrea, From one mother to another, this was just beautiful! Great entry for the contest theme. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Gauthier Avatar
January 26, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Lovely, Andrea.
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