Angel Woman

You win again, my angel heart
I count the days when we're apart;
I trail  alone once you're away
No sense in saying I wish you'd stay

Your angel lips, etched in the sand
A thrill etched in the sand, let’s fly
I’m drawn, drawn by your command
Restless am I, another goodbye?

You’re a runaway,dressed to fly
Like a  blink on ivory sky...
No, I bow like a  night owl's wing
Come to me, thirsty with longing.

Your searching heart will never find
Any arms as cuddly as mine;
Don't come and go just like the rain
This time, babe, never leave again.




Craig Cornish's Lyrics Again
nette onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:50 PM
You can write with best of them my friend. Super lyrics and such a smooth flow!!! Definitely a super 7 from me...
Bordner Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 8:14 PM
You have such a flexibl style, and a voice of wide poetic range Nette. Angel Woman, untethered to time, unbothered by pine, when love is ripe, you'll be in sight. "Youre my runaway frolic..." You truly invoke the desperation of a man's dependence on a woman's touch Nette...J.A.B.
Roberts Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 9:13 PM
nice words Nette ....Seren
Anish Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:49 PM
It seems as if you are writing from a man's persona here. Very clever, indeed! I am still looking for the "angel woman". Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Carroll Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Good rhyme scheme and overall write Nette!
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:41 PM
beautifully written as ever Nette:-) Many congrats on your win. Hugs Jan xxxx
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 3:21 PM
Nette, I am back again. I am spending so much time on your pages you're going to have to start charging me for rent. Congratulations on your win with this marvelous lyric.
Datu Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:50 AM
I kinda like this woman-- hard to get. You whipped this poem with rockin' cream. Outstanding,Nette
Horsman Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Oh wonderful poetry, and having listen to the tune in Craig's contest,,just love it. Good luck with this it will rate high of that i'm sure...
Bateman Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 4:01 PM
Very nice work here Nette!! I always enjoy the metaphors you use. I like the narrative interaction in your work too. Have a wonderful weekend!! Cheers, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:02 PM
so beautifully penned nette excellent piece
Onat Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 11:59 AM
So upbeat I feel like wanting an angel like this one. This hits a catchy, beautiful chord in me; wow!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 10:45 AM
Wow Nette as amazing as always! Loved much !
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