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Angel Wings, Amusement Park Mouth


"Angel Wings, Amusement Park Mouth"


Dark horses 
aren’t necessarily angels
wrung out poets more like
unblessed prodigals 
soaking in their own tears 
spin sugared fairy-floss unrelentingly out 
their dark sap, "Lost Woods" words,
and the ink no longer necessary
bleeds invisible
from their tap-dancing fingers
instead of dripping like blood
or honey off their 
well-armoured tongues 
and their messages
like murders of crows
fly out of their amusement park 
mind instead of their mouth;

it's a private affair, 
nobody really knows;

we sing our way home
on some bent kind of angel wings;

Dark horses
aren't necessarily angels -

the mind, authentic
is another thing...


Candide Diderot. ‘24
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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October 31, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Cool with a unique vibe.
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October 31, 2025 at 10:32 AM
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October 30, 2025 at 9:29 PM
Poetry: A love / hate relationship.
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October 30, 2025 at 9:28 PM
"Stream of Consciousness"/Lola Young (with Lyrics).
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October 30, 2025 at 9:31 PM
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October 30, 2025 at 9:30 PM
All releases, Lola Young. https://www.youtube.com/@LolaYounggg/releases
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October 30, 2025 at 7:47 AM
"Messy"/Lola Young.
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October 30, 2025 at 8:12 AM
LYRICS/ "Messy", Lola Young. ********************** https://genius.com/Lola-young-messy-lyrics
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October 30, 2025 at 7:48 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k-k2_Liofy8
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