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Angel the Dreamer

My name is Angel the dreamer I’m still inside my beloved mother Three months to be exact I’m so happy it’s the fact Mommy and Daddy love me For the whole world to see Because they plan my future That’s what I heard not sure I can feel they are glad and excited To go to the doctor and be consulted Feels good to know they care But surprises to see the doctor’s stare With the instruments he hold I’m afraid and my body feels so cold Then my mother began to cry I don’t know the reason why Suddenly I feel my body is in deep pain Ouch!! ahhhhh!! It hurts, what happen? Where are you Mommy? I am afraid! Please take care of me as what you said Now I will not be born after all Shattered dreams, bless my soul Goodbye to all, its time for me to fly Up in the world of nowhere above the sky 10/8/12 For Scribe Marlon Linton's "Unborn Babies Dream" Contest 2nd Place Winner By: Maria Paz Samelo

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Date: 10/17/2012 7:16:00 PM
MY HEARTY CONGRATULATION MY DEAR FRIEND, MARY!! I AM SO EXTREMELY HAPPY AND SO PROUD OF YOU! love, Norie
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Maria. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:58:00 AM
Many congrats Maria on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:12:00 AM
Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:49:00 AM
thanks friend Deb :)
Date: 10/15/2012 4:56:00 AM
congrats on your win with this melancholy write Maria
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Date: 10/15/2012 8:47:00 AM
thanks friend Joseph May :)
Date: 10/14/2012 7:47:00 PM
Maria, congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:28:00 PM
thanks Lee, congrats to you too :)
Date: 10/14/2012 7:32:00 PM
MARIA, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:25:00 PM
thanks PD :) congrats to you too :)
Date: 10/14/2012 4:12:00 PM
CONGRATS MARIA ON AN ELEGANT WRITE AND WIN LUV ..
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:12:00 PM
thanks friend Linda Marie :) congrats to you too
Date: 10/13/2012 1:40:00 AM
wow, what a creative piece this is. REally like how you did your entry. Awesome.
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Date: 10/14/2012 9:09:00 PM
thanks friend Andrea :) good day!
Date: 10/10/2012 11:35:00 PM
This emotional write encompasses the rebirth odyssey very well Maria - the last two line communicate something fatal, but also immortal and redeeming for this lost corporeal opportunity - the tragic transition really made me feel somber - J.A.B. %
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Date: 10/10/2012 11:44:00 PM
i know how you feel friend Justin..I just remember the homily of our Priest last sunday about some information on Abortion worldwide so I wrote this poem...
Date: 10/9/2012 1:54:00 AM
Wow!! This is awesome and delightful my friend! i love it and I love the form. You're really creative! Good luck in the contest! warm hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:50:00 AM
thanks dear Leonora...have a nice day always!!
Date: 10/7/2012 10:55:00 PM
The configuration of your lines actually makes this easier to read. Everything here is very descriptive.
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Date: 10/9/2012 2:49:00 AM
thanks Robert for your comment
Date: 10/7/2012 4:37:00 PM
great write you got here Maria,,,, I know what it feels like to have miscarriages,
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Date: 10/7/2012 2:43:00 PM
Moving poem. I like the way you staggered the lines to add to the impact of the words.
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Date: 10/7/2012 10:19:00 PM
thanks friend Joan..have a nice day!
Date: 10/7/2012 12:10:00 PM
Your mother will always take care of you little angel - even in heaven - Luck in contest !!!! Very sweet and loving poem Maria - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:18:00 PM
thank you so much my dear friend Anne Lise...have a blessed day always!!
Date: 10/7/2012 12:03:00 PM
very moving write, my friend. Congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:17:00 PM
thanks friend Jack...not yet a winner..still hoping (^_^)
Date: 10/7/2012 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful form and display here my friend. Michael
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Date: 10/7/2012 12:16:00 PM
thanks friend Michael...good day!!

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