Angel Starstruck Lucky Gem

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Angel i began the title

as the one in a hundred syllables

is a coupling in unrhymed tercets

three steps to heaven seven syllables

meaning equal fifty fifty

Many moons ago your starlit beautiful the day of birth dreams began Circling true warm dust was cast into the wake of wishes floating sparks hot Burning arrow head fires destinies spark igniting winks hope is born You came in a dark nightlight crystal clear cut dressed satin white holding flames Finding a peace of heaven inside a breathless whisper sighs love unconditional

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Charlie Smith

Date: 12/23/2016 11:04:00 AM

Wonderful Write Liam, Merry Christmas...

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/22/2016 8:17:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^