Notes About The Poem

Angel i began the title 

as the one in a hundred syllables 

is a coupling in unrhymed tercets 

three steps to heaven seven syllables 

meaning equal fifty fifty 

Angel Starstruck Lucky Gem

Many moons ago 
your starlit beautiful 
the day of birth dreams began

Circling true warm dust 
was cast into the wake 
of wishes floating sparks hot

Burning arrow head 
fires destinies spark 
igniting winks hope is born 

You came in a dark 
nightlight crystal clear cut 
dressed satin white holding flames 

Finding a peace of heaven 
inside a breathless whisper 
sighs love unconditional
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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December 23, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Wonderful Write Liam, Merry Christmas...
Petersen Potter Avatar
December 22, 2016 at 8:17 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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