Angel Or Demon

Angel or Demon
What does he appear to be
He meets them, takes them
With no pity
 
He trawls the streets
Bar to bar
His deed is done
Emotional scars
 
The morning after
As they pick up the pieces
His victims in trauma
As the previous night releases
 
These vulnerable ladies
Of the night they be
In their liberty they work
But are they really free



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 12/2/2009 2:47:00 PM
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Date: 11/14/2009 12:02:00 PM
Great insight, James. I'll answer your question. They are NOT free. They are slaves to men's fantasies and the long coveted dollar. God bless their souls with safety, repentance, and self-restoration. Let us all pray. And cast NOT the first stone of judgment. God poem, James. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/14/2009 5:08:00 AM
Good question asked in the last verse. Another question is how long will their life be? Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2009 3:53:00 AM
Sounds like jack the ripper! I personally like meeting girls at the bar Mr. Fraser,....the salad bar ! *smiles* Great Write Sir ! james
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Date: 11/13/2009 8:18:00 PM
Bars never are nor have been the places to meet quality people... your poem is an eye opener for many ... impressive theme and thoughtful write, James, as always, have enjoyed... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/13/2009 4:11:00 PM
Definetely worth taking the time to get to know someone first. Bars are such easy pickup for so many and for others they get taken advantage of. Sometimes either way its mutual, hmmm. Good food for thought James. Enjoyed the read. Love Light Patty
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