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Angel Or Demon

Angel or Demon What does he appear to be He meets them, takes them With no pity He trawls the streets Bar to bar His deed is done Emotional scars The morning after As they pick up the pieces His victims in trauma As the previous night releases These vulnerable ladies Of the night they be In their liberty they work But are they really free http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-5.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/2/2009 2:47:00 PM
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Date: 11/14/2009 12:02:00 PM
Great insight, James. I'll answer your question. They are NOT free. They are slaves to men's fantasies and the long coveted dollar. God bless their souls with safety, repentance, and self-restoration. Let us all pray. And cast NOT the first stone of judgment. God poem, James. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/14/2009 5:08:00 AM
Good question asked in the last verse. Another question is how long will their life be? Thanks for the comments on my work. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2009 3:53:00 AM
Sounds like jack the ripper! I personally like meeting girls at the bar Mr. Fraser,....the salad bar ! *smiles* Great Write Sir ! james
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Date: 11/13/2009 8:18:00 PM
Bars never are nor have been the places to meet quality people... your poem is an eye opener for many ... impressive theme and thoughtful write, James, as always, have enjoyed... luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/13/2009 4:11:00 PM
Definetely worth taking the time to get to know someone first. Bars are such easy pickup for so many and for others they get taken advantage of. Sometimes either way its mutual, hmmm. Good food for thought James. Enjoyed the read. Love Light Patty
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