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Angel of the Sea

the waves so high and forceful rushing toward me like a train i'm off my feet going down so deep the water fills my brain floating to the bottom i see all blackness now then something grabs me from behind and lifts me up somehow the air overwhelms me as my lungs began to swell will never again take for granted a breath that never fails the wind blows right through me and chills me to my core while the sun on my face delights my every pore my eyes now in focus for my rescuer to see the most beautiful thing i ever saw god had sent to save just me her eyes and skin just glistened and shined like all the stars my dolphin angel you'll always be even from afar she nodded and then smiled so lovingly at me then she turned away and went back down into the deep blue sea.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/2/2018 10:23:00 PM
Lovely, Melissa. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 5/31/2018 8:23:00 PM
This is so lovely. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/31/2018 4:40:00 PM
a beautiful dolphin tale! Congrats!
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Date: 5/27/2018 5:55:00 AM
Lovely writing style...rhythm and flow...a good message too
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Melissa Melton
Date: 5/30/2018 12:46:00 AM
thanks for your nice comment on my poem. really meant alot.

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