Angel Loves the Devil

Leaning in a whisper brings red to her cheeks

Wings fluttering at his touch

Hot as fire against cool as clouds

A tempting death

Blushing never felt so good

His kiss starting a new fire

A fire from hell

Standing beside the angel

His jaw bone breaks her innocence

He is beautiful

A fallen angel
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Eddie Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 9:52 PM
This one kind of reminded me of my style. I can dig it. Good job. Keep up the good work.
Logan Avatar
October 28, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Good poem, reminded me of "Satan himself keeps disguising himself as an angel of light." 2Cor 11:14.
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October 27, 2016 at 2:41 PM
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