Angel In Your Eyes

Baby, I saw the light
while looking up into your eyes.
Tears streaming down your face,
we were waiting on a better place.
Love filled me from the inside.
You and I side by side,
going
somewhere
brighter on the other side.

Feelings that I can't explain
filled me as my life drained.
I needed you more as time passed.
Both of us were fading fast.
Being driven towards destination,
We were feeding each others determination
going
somewhere
higher on the loving side.

An intense need for you and me
together to be set free.
In order for us to survive
we had to keep each other alive.
Compelled to get where we were going,
neither of us knowing,
Going
somewhere
brighter on the other side.

Author: Kristina Robertson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/10/2013 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations!!! Kristina --It was nice viewing your Featured Poem on the soups Home page :) this past week. Take Care and enjoy the NEW coming week.... *Luv~ > LINDA <
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Date: 10/22/2013 12:44:00 AM
Nice one Kristina, I liked it! You too like to write some romantic stuff -cool! By the way Welcome to Poetry Soup!!! MC
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Date: 10/21/2013 8:08:00 PM
Welcome to PSoup. Your talent is evident and you should draw the praise your writing deserves.... Nice writing..... Jake
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Date: 10/18/2013 5:27:00 AM
Kristina, I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:59:00 AM
Well penned dear one! Welcome to poetrysoup,here is a safe haven where you can freely pour your feelings into writing and also get inspired by the works of the other poets.
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:08:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Kristina ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - A lovely poem. - Luck in contest !! - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:18:00 AM
nice poem & hello!
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Date: 10/18/2013 12:06:00 AM
very sad and complex but very well written...you are new to the Soup? well then a big welcome to you Kristina! love,Deb
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Date: 10/17/2013 11:25:00 PM
beautiful post, Kristina your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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