Angel In the Clouds

Clouds in the sky on

this most beautiful day.

As I look up seeing

an Angel just sitting

there gazing down at

me, not saying much,

just letting me know

that I was safe for

now, then she

bid me fair well,

as it gently floated away.

written 5-2-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 19, 2011 at 4:49 AM
Stopping by this morning to let you know I enjoy reading your poetry very much James. I want to thank you for your kind words on my poetry. May the sun always shine upon you and bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol
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May 8, 2011 at 5:57 AM
I collect Angels James and feel secure knowing their presence is always surrounding us.. this piece is so gentle and so powerful at the same time.. Angels watch over us from the time we breathe our first breath luv.. excellent.. my Mom is an Angel in Heaven .. enjoyed..luv..
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May 7, 2011 at 1:50 PM
wow! I love the uplifting thought... have your self a wonderful MOTHERS DAY tomorrow... celebrate with smiles ... take care..P.D.
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May 14, 2011 at 5:49 PM
thank you for reading and commenting on angel in the clouds, i see this is a new thing that has been added. if people reply to this does it go to our email, i have a new email don't know if soup has it or not.
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May 7, 2011 at 10:38 AM
James, this is a delightful way to express your faith. Clouds take so many images. One person may see an angel while another sees a tiger. You have an upbeat perspective that eminates from your words. Well done! Love, Carolyn
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May 6, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Thanks for your comments on Chickadee Symphony, glad you enjoyed. So sorry for not acknowledging your lovely comments sooner... a poetry dry spell descended for a bit... then had internet connection problem for a bit.
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May 14, 2011 at 6:13 PM
i really enjoy your poetry and thank you for reading and commenting on angel in the clouds i had internet trouble also, it was out for over one week, but is back now.
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May 5, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Lovely write, James! Amazing what clouds can evoke. :) Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Caroline.
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May 4, 2011 at 7:37 PM
nice peaceful relaxing prayerful poem, James. I enjoyed it
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May 4, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Fine flight of imagination nicely worded, James
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May 4, 2011 at 2:37 PM
what a splendid image this was to see this afternoon, and yes, James, I googled dolphins before writing about them, and it said some of them have rescued other animals like whales as well as Humans from shark attacks!! And also (I didn't have room to write this in my poem) but they can use TOOLS (they fashioned their own device for protecting their snouts while swimming, using sponge from the ocean!),etc.
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