Angel

A smile from you is gold to me,
A laugh of yours I'll never leave.
I'll write until my wish comes true,
Do you see me like I see you?

Your soul is as precious as roses,
As beautiful as snowflakes on noses.
Under that skin, inside your heart,
Can that be what I'll be apart?

The words you say I won't forget,
Nor your image my dear brunette.
I'll write until we start to make,
The memories, the ones I won't forsake.

A smile formed on your pretty face,
The steps you make that can you trace.
One thing for sure I know will be,
Is this poem, to you from me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Tugaff Avatar
February 9, 2018 at 9:15 AM
A Beautiful, inspiring piece of work. I love it.
Watson Avatar
February 10, 2018 at 11:55 AM
thank you!
Walton Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 1:10 PM
I really love this. Sentimental, playful, yet deep. Good job Amily!
Watson Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 1:29 PM
I love the poem, the rhyming and choice of words. It evokes a visual and also the feelings. Well done!
Otieng Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 6:04 AM
Lovely love poem. Nice work.
Watson Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 6:37 PM
Thank you! :)
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January 29, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Amily, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this marvelous community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I TOO am ready to enjoy and follow you and your poetry if you'd like :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup 2018 :) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Watson Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Thank you, I feel very welcomed! I would really appreciate it if you did, but only if you want to. :)
Ajmal Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:24 AM
A very nice written poem, welcome to poetrysoup, I m sure that you re gonna love your stay here, good luck and continue to write
Watson Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 7:12 PM
Thank you! I will. :)
Michael Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 11:27 PM
A beautiful love poem...Smooth and Easy to read...All the best Amily
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