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Angel

astray in dark woods night- stranger guides me halfway... leaving his torchlight Contest for Brian Strand 5/24/2019

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J. Tudor

Date: 4/20/2016 2:16:00 PM

It's compactness stretches beyond it's horizons. J.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 4/14/2016 3:46:00 PM

Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed reading this Senryu. We shall always find there are Angels to look out for us, they don't always have wings either Nette. An excellent write. Hugs....Mike. XX. This one is deserving of a seven.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 4/12/2016 5:45:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Nette

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/12/2016 5:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Nette :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/12/2016 4:27:00 PM

I am back to keep my promise, Nette:) Congratulations on this high flying win!! hugs // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/12/2016 12:15:00 PM

Congratulations Nette, a deserving win...

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/12/2016 10:47:00 AM

Congrats on your superb win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/12/2016 10:09:00 AM

Very poetic lines. Congrats on your win...

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 4/12/2016 8:48:00 AM

Congratz Nette!

Lu Loo

Date: 4/12/2016 8:24:00 AM

Nette, just beautiful..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo.

Rob Carmack

Date: 4/12/2016 2:27:00 AM

Nette, nice imagery and contrast with the 'torchlight'. Congrats on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2016 12:56:00 AM

Nette, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/9/2016 3:21:00 PM

Beautiful poem in contest my lovely friend. Wish you good luck. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/9/2016 8:57:00 AM

Enchanting and esoteric senyru - excellent senyru, much more to the three lines than at first meets the eyes.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2016 12:56:00 PM

Awesome write, Nette! Good luck in the contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2016 10:03:00 AM

That is what angels are for, Nette! They give a helping hand in times of need. I shall be back with congratulations! #7 hugs // paul

Brian Strand

Date: 4/6/2016 1:02:00 PM

anette you arealways such an encouragement have a creative day.rgds Brian

Moon Flower

Date: 4/6/2016 11:48:00 AM

I like it whenever one writes about an angel. And this certainly a great write! GL

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/6/2016 10:44:00 AM

a well written masterpice I always find everytime I pass by.. , all the best!

Constance La France

Date: 4/6/2016 9:49:00 AM

Nette, this is very nice for the contest, best of luck 7 ~

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/6/2016 8:57:00 AM

Inspirational! Great senryu, nette. Good luck! Peace pretty lady:)

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2016 6:32:00 AM

absolutely beautiful Nette he is your guiding light:-) hugs jan xx

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 4/6/2016 5:21:00 AM

This is one of the best Nette!

Carly Lalion

Date: 4/6/2016 5:20:00 AM

The way you presented the theme is stunning poetry. Angels come in unusual, majestic guises" leaving torchlight" of guidance!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2016 5:18:00 AM

- Beautifully Angel poem, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs and happy day // Anne-Lise :)