Angel

astray in dark woods

night- stranger guides me halfway...

leaving his torchlight




Contest for Brian Strand  5/24/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Tudor Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 2:16 PM
It's compactness stretches beyond it's horizons. J.
Raven Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 3:46 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your win in the contest. I enjoyed reading this Senryu. We shall always find there are Angels to look out for us, they don't always have wings either Nette. An excellent write. Hugs....Mike. XX. This one is deserving of a seven.
Negron Flores Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Congratulations on your win Nette
Leiser Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 5:25 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette :)
Callus Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 4:27 PM
I am back to keep my promise, Nette:) Congratulations on this high flying win!! hugs // paul
Smith Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations Nette, a deserving win...
Devnath  Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 10:47 AM
Congrats on your superb win with this beautiful poem my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Gupta Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 10:09 AM
Very poetic lines. Congrats on your win...
Celestial Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Congratz Nette!
Scars Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:24 AM
Nette, just beautiful..congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo.
Carmack Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 2:27 AM
Nette, nice imagery and contrast with the 'torchlight'. Congrats on your win.
A   Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 12:56 AM
Nette, Congrats on your "Senryu about Angels." Love LINDA
Devnath  Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 3:21 PM
Beautiful poem in contest my lovely friend. Wish you good luck. Loved always, bl
Gazbowski Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Enchanting and esoteric senyru - excellent senyru, much more to the three lines than at first meets the eyes.
Roper Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 12:56 PM
Awesome write, Nette! Good luck in the contest.
Callus Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 10:03 AM
That is what angels are for, Nette! They give a helping hand in times of need. I shall be back with congratulations! #7 hugs // paul
Strand Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 1:02 PM
anette you arealways such an encouragement have a creative day.rgds Brian
Flower Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 11:48 AM
I like it whenever one writes about an angel. And this certainly a great write! GL
Torres Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM
a well written masterpice I always find everytime I pass by.. , all the best!
La France Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 9:49 AM
Nette, this is very nice for the contest, best of luck 7 ~
Turner Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 8:57 AM
Inspirational! Great senryu, nette. Good luck! Peace pretty lady:)
Allison Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 6:32 AM
absolutely beautiful Nette he is your guiding light:-) hugs jan xx
Celestial Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:21 AM
This is one of the best Nette!
Lalion Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:20 AM
The way you presented the theme is stunning poetry. Angels come in unusual, majestic guises" leaving torchlight" of guidance!
Andresen Avatar
April 6, 2016 at 5:18 AM
- Beautifully Angel poem, Nette - Luck in contest - hugs and happy day // Anne-Lise :)
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