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Angel

Angel.

Nights in black and white,
My mind keeps drifting from side to side.

Wondering about the voice I heard at night,
Is it an angel or God?

"Be patient," The voice said,
I heard it so clear, strange to say the least.

The voice whispered in my own ear,
It made me scared, and it made me fear.

Fear from God who heard my cry,
Begging for mercy, to save a child.

Praying to all angels to keep her safe
The mother of my children, and my soulmate.

This is a sign for me to know,
That God is up there, and I am not alone.

I did get angry for the suffering you caused,
Left without mercy this innocent soul.

She's confused she said.
"why me"? "What have I done,
To deserve such pain"?
"Or is it my luck or my fate"?
 
She was punished for no real crime?
My soulmate, the one I love.

I’ll keep my faith every time I'm down,
With my forehead touching the ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/6/2016 2:43:00 AM
Greetings Ali. Congrats for your top placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 1/6/2016 6:04:00 AM
Thank you Teddy. ;)
Date: 1/6/2016 12:39:00 AM
Hi Ali, I was moved by your poem the first time. Happy to see you take a win with your poem. Congratulations. LINDA
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Date: 1/6/2016 6:06:00 AM
Thanks, i always love to hear from you ;) you are such a support!
Date: 1/3/2016 11:40:00 PM
A beautiful write, Ali. Congratulations on your win in the "Angels" contest. T.J
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Date: 1/4/2016 8:32:00 AM
Thank you Teppo.
Date: 1/3/2016 11:24:00 PM
hI ALI, Congratulations on your "Angel" win. **SKAT**
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Date: 1/4/2016 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Skat.
Date: 1/2/2016 5:49:00 PM
Congrats for your win with this lovely writing.
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:14:00 PM
Thank you Andrea. I appreciate it a lot. xx
Date: 1/2/2016 3:48:00 PM
How beautiful, Ali, heartfelt.?Congratulation on your win!
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:15:00 PM
Thanks Eve, your are very kind.
Date: 1/2/2016 1:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, so well deserved, your poem is beautiful and heartfelt. Jean
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:17:00 PM
Jean that's so encouraging, thanks a lot.
Date: 1/2/2016 1:27:00 PM
I am sorry about your loved one. It is hard to see a loved one suffer. Joyce
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Date: 1/2/2016 8:26:00 PM
Indeed it's very very hard.
Date: 1/2/2016 5:34:00 AM
Congratulations! :)
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Hansteven.
Date: 1/2/2016 1:05:00 AM
I am sorry for your pain....
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:23:00 AM
Thanks, I appreciate.
Date: 1/2/2016 12:18:00 AM
I believe every word ! Congrats on the topmost slot!
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:24:00 AM
Thanks Balveen. Just from the heart.
Date: 1/1/2016 8:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Ali
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Date: 1/2/2016 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Nayda. xx
Date: 2/14/2013 11:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem Ali, keep the faith and hope all goes well with your family, may angels stand by her side, love debra
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Date: 2/14/2013 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Debra, Of course my faith is very strong and angels spoke to me once when I was really down, he said be patient and I did and I am seeing a difference ;) Always and forever! Ali
Date: 1/8/2013 8:59:00 PM
ALI, your poem is freedom.... the feel and vision in your poem brings faith to mind... I am loving this poem... I think all angels are worth keeping around...always~LINDA
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:23:00 AM
Hi Linda, I'll tell you a secret, it's true i didn't invent it. I heard the voice. My wife got very sick last year she got the big "C" and our life was turned upside down. It was very tormenting for me to see the love of my life suddenly diagnosed with a terrible disease. But thank God she is still here and hope one day she will be back on her feet again!!! Thank you once again. Love Ali