Angel

In the cold of December
Lost in my own world
I was talking to myself
Why does my love hurt
Thats when i heard you
Sobbing, I guess t'was pain
One look at your face then 
And I was in love again

I knew you had fallen
From heaven above,
You gave me no reason
Why was it so?
I held out my hand,You
Took it so gently,
I carried you home
I cared for you gladly

When the morning sunlight
Touched me across my face
I thought it was you
Comforting me,
Memories hit hard
Dont turn away please
Ive fought wit the lord
To keep you with me

Remember the first time
We made love,
I caressed your body
Your angelic skin,
I held you so gently
Your eyes lost in mine,
I held you so closely
My love lost in time

Light on the other side
Maybe much brighter
But no one can love you
As much as me,
Your innocent presence
Had me in wonders
Now your untold absence
Is killing me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Gupta Avatar
November 16, 2011 at 1:47 AM
adorable......nice work loved it............ Oscar
A   Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 5:47 AM
Wow! Oscar you really expressed yourself with strong emotions. I really enjoyed your poem. I am still saying wow to your poem sad memories and the longing is rather well felt. Nice job and feeling you offer on your poem, enjoyed, and thanks for the comment you left me. a little note,, when you left me the comments I was under the P.DESTROYER.. for a while i will use my real name . Have a nice day Oscar,..p.d.
Neels Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 11:03 AM
Very emotional write Oscar.. ~ i really am enjoying ur work ~ tc WN
Mannan Avatar
June 2, 2010 at 4:53 AM
Hey Oscar a greatly emotional poem. Great imagery.
Gorelick Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Lovely piece..the 4th stanza is very special..It could stand alone. Thak you for commenting on the pie piece. Fun to write something light and easy once in a while. BG
Kapoor Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Beautiful Poem showing your soft and tender feelings. You have great potentials keep writing. And many thanks for your appreciation of my poem. Love and best wishes always. ......Ravindra.......Oscar Mescarerihas
Mehta Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 6:33 AM
Fine reflections on the loved one with nice images. Very soft and tender
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