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Angel

In the cold of December Lost in my own world I was talking to myself Why does my love hurt Thats when i heard you Sobbing, I guess t'was pain One look at your face then And I was in love again I knew you had fallen From heaven above, You gave me no reason Why was it so? I held out my hand,You Took it so gently, I carried you home I cared for you gladly When the morning sunlight Touched me across my face I thought it was you Comforting me, Memories hit hard Dont turn away please Ive fought wit the lord To keep you with me Remember the first time We made love, I caressed your body Your angelic skin, I held you so gently Your eyes lost in mine, I held you so closely My love lost in time Light on the other side Maybe much brighter But no one can love you As much as me, Your innocent presence Had me in wonders Now your untold absence Is killing me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/16/2011 1:47:00 AM
adorable......nice work loved it............ Oscar
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Date: 6/15/2010 5:47:00 AM
Wow! Oscar you really expressed yourself with strong emotions. I really enjoyed your poem. I am still saying wow to your poem sad memories and the longing is rather well felt. Nice job and feeling you offer on your poem, enjoyed, and thanks for the comment you left me. a little note,, when you left me the comments I was under the P.DESTROYER.. for a while i will use my real name . Have a nice day Oscar,..p.d.
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Date: 6/4/2010 11:03:00 AM
Very emotional write Oscar.. ~ i really am enjoying ur work ~ tc WN
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:53:00 AM
Hey Oscar a greatly emotional poem. Great imagery.
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:12:00 AM
Lovely piece..the 4th stanza is very special..It could stand alone. Thak you for commenting on the pie piece. Fun to write something light and easy once in a while. BG
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Date: 5/30/2010 7:44:00 AM
Beautiful Poem showing your soft and tender feelings. You have great potentials keep writing. And many thanks for your appreciation of my poem. Love and best wishes always. ......Ravindra.......Oscar Mescarerihas
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Date: 5/29/2010 6:33:00 AM
Fine reflections on the loved one with nice images. Very soft and tender
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