Angel 1

All i write is free on here What captures me Is a Devonshire ear Vibes and thoughts Appear to be Have we met before Let me see Was it the Merrimac Or Monitor Her Grandad being In the Civil War Reincarnation is just a word Some believe Some absurd Tell me what you want to know If i was there My mind will flow I'll close my eyes Reveal to you Are you someone I once knew Do not panic Its only me I will look around If you're there I'll see You're in my world No harm to you My monitors guide you through Angel 1 One being the best The Devonshire Zest.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/6/2009 1:04:00 PM

Nice tribute to Carolyn. Who knows what might have been or what the future holds only God.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/3/2009 8:19:00 AM

First of all, my reaction is everything Ruben said. And further, I must admit the eerie similarity in our subjects and poetry style have confounded me since you appeared on this site. As you say, it may have been a past-life experience we shared to take us to this point. The sea was too rough this morning, but we hope to fish this afternoon. So I am sharing your work with my friends. They are quite intrigued as well! Bless you, my friend and kindred spirit. Love, Carolyn