"angel"

I fell asleep and then I flew.
High into heaven with a sky so blue.
I saw an angel and she spoke to me.
Your in heaven is that where you want to be.
"Crying"I said no I'd rather be with my mom and dad.
Then go home she said and don't be sad.
When I awoke and saw the sun.
I went and told my mom what I'd done.
My mom said"is your angel still with you".
I said"yes mom she's eating oatmeal to".
                Teresa Skyles
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Mannan Avatar
August 20, 2010 at 10:18 PM
What a lovely rhyme dear. Many congrats for the win. Thanks for the comments.
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:37 PM
Congrats on the win, Teresa
Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2010 at 8:05 PM
cute little poem. Congrats on your HM, Teresa. Luv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
August 15, 2010 at 10:35 AM
My congratulations to you Teresa on your win in Joe Flach's contest "One For the Kiddies". Love, Carol
Flach Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Teresa, this is a nice, easy to read, easy to understand poem for the kiddies. It is a smooth read and flows very nicely. It is also such a cute story. If you could expand on this a little bit with a few more lines/stanzas it would have ranked higher in my contest. Also, check out line 4 - I think that first word should be "You're". And check out the spacing with your quote signs - maybe it's my computer or PS, but some spaces appear to be missing. Thanks for entering this in the contest.
Fraser Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 7:33 AM
Many congratulations Teresa on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 4:15 AM
A well deserved win, teresa
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 3:49 PM
I love poems about angels Teresa. Congratulations on your win. Aloha, Connie
Sweetheart Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 2:00 PM
Congrats Teresa on your HM in Joe's contest with this sweet write.. enjoy your special honor my friend.. I am in flight right now typing on my cell phone..luv..
Fraser Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Nice piece Teresa, lovely poem >> James
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