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"angel"

I fell asleep and then I flew. High into heaven with a sky so blue. I saw an angel and she spoke to me. Your in heaven is that where you want to be. "Crying"I said no I'd rather be with my mom and dad. Then go home she said and don't be sad. When I awoke and saw the sun. I went and told my mom what I'd done. My mom said"is your angel still with you". I said"yes mom she's eating oatmeal to". Teresa Skyles

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Date: 8/20/2010 10:18:00 PM
What a lovely rhyme dear. Many congrats for the win. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Teresa
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Date: 8/16/2010 8:05:00 PM
cute little poem. Congrats on your HM, Teresa. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:35:00 AM
My congratulations to you Teresa on your win in Joe Flach's contest "One For the Kiddies". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2010 9:52:00 AM
Teresa, this is a nice, easy to read, easy to understand poem for the kiddies. It is a smooth read and flows very nicely. It is also such a cute story. If you could expand on this a little bit with a few more lines/stanzas it would have ranked higher in my contest. Also, check out line 4 - I think that first word should be "You're". And check out the spacing with your quote signs - maybe it's my computer or PS, but some spaces appear to be missing. Thanks for entering this in the contest.
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Date: 8/14/2010 7:33:00 AM
Many congratulations Teresa on your win in the contest with this wonderful poem >> James
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Date: 8/14/2010 4:15:00 AM
A well deserved win, teresa
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Date: 8/13/2010 3:49:00 PM
I love poems about angels Teresa. Congratulations on your win. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 8/13/2010 2:00:00 PM
Congrats Teresa on your HM in Joe's contest with this sweet write.. enjoy your special honor my friend.. I am in flight right now typing on my cell phone..luv..
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Date: 10/13/2009 1:40:00 PM
Nice piece Teresa, lovely poem >> James
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