Ange

With the way you smile behind those eyes, Ange!
There’s something that I can see,
An eternal candle that glows with a legendary flare,
A flare that makes me to adore you, 
And forever, I will recollect you, Ange!
Your smile makes me proud to have you as my dear acquaintance, Ange!
Now! Come closer, friend,
And be submissive, because I need your power,
The power of amity is worn as destiny.
Not only is your smile the voyage to my castle, 
But all features of you Ange! Enshrine a good friend in my castle.
Behind those eyes, there’s always a lot I can transcribe and articulate,
But, this is just another log-line of #Bryan to #Ange.

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Negron Flores Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 8:41 PM
Excellent poem Bryan
Oule Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 11:51 PM
Nayda Thanks for taking your stint to read my poem, I embrace your gratitude, so very much
Dietrich Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 4:53 PM
Ange sounds like someone dearly loved!!
Oule Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 6:07 AM
She is loved and she too cares for Bryan, And thank you for reading my piece, Hugs Andrea,
Pinet Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 10:56 AM
You paint a picture with words that bring your memories alive in the reader's mind, and we too can appreciate the strength and purity of your feelings. Emile.
Oule Avatar
May 26, 2015 at 6:06 AM
Emile thank you for the powerful comment, i embrace
Muideen Avatar
May 19, 2015 at 1:12 PM
A very interesting piece, be submissive because I need your power, the power of amity is worn by destiny,Paul, all you need a few more poems like this your Ange will be submissive.
Oule Avatar
May 22, 2015 at 7:53 AM
Sure she will be submissive soon, Thank you #Afolabi for reading my masterpiece about #Ange You rock
Buzaabo Avatar
May 17, 2015 at 4:12 AM
Ange, Angel accept this warm tribute from bryan. He is inviting your submission for his power for he seem helpless without you. This is a masterpiece, I likest!
Oule Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 4:48 AM
Joran i love your echo to #ANGE, Sure she will always submit those powers to me It's just a matter of time brother and when. I'm thrilled and glad you took your time to read this masterpiece of mine you will always be my brother Thank you so much for reading, liking, commenting and fundamentally signing here My brother
Callus Avatar
May 15, 2015 at 5:19 PM
A lovely smile could easily turn out to be the start of a romantic acquaintance, Bryan! All it need s are a few more poems like this one! // paul
Oule Avatar
May 18, 2015 at 5:01 AM
Yes i accede with you Paul, a lovely smile is adorable and will always lure me to Ange, Fact Ange always receives poems like this from me. But i & Ange we are better off as my friends Thank you for viewing my poem brother Paul
Nunez Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 6:23 AM
Wow...our Bryan seems to be infatuated! Well, there's nothing like poetry to impress the girl...Good luck, Bryan! I'm sure she will like your poem... Kim :-)
Oule Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 12:21 AM
Not really infatuated Kim, She just made me smile some time back, and one who makes me smile wins a position in my heart, she loved the poem definitely &she was impressed. Now, How about i try impress you too, Let's start with, what do you like?
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