Anfractuosity

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Seldom does anyone see the genuine reciprocity Deep beneath the surface of loves viscosity So many relationships end by this atrocity This demonic plague is such a monstrosity Failure is overwhelmingly full of pomposity Sad when true beauty develops callosity Ponder that number in total numerosity My desire to escape this exceeds hypervelocity No further trauma needed to my anfractuosity

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/20/2023 8:48:00 AM

It's a shame how people and relationships can grow callous with time, when they were so close. Very deep and I enjoyed reading it and wrapping my mind around it.

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/21/2023 8:17:00 PM

Sad in deed what the world has taught me, is most relationships are seasonal.... how many seasons is a matter of the people involved. Kindest Regards A.S.

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/19/2023 10:02:00 PM

The first line in this poem says it all, AS. In this me first world we live in, no one even looks to see another's contribution or sacrifice. Nice writing:)

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/21/2023 8:18:00 PM

Well put and more then just a little bit true DT.... however it is not an impossibility to still be loving dispite how others are. Regards A.S.

Sand Blown

Date: 4/16/2023 9:23:00 PM

...yup....true consideration can/does/will demand some stress considerations...... ....stan

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/17/2023 10:09:00 AM

A well noted interpretation thank you very much for the visit! A.S.

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 4/16/2023 6:30:00 PM

Sending you some felicity To give you more blissisity! Elizabeth

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/16/2023 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much for the well wishes Elizabeth! Please know that my sails are well in hand ;) Warmly A.S.