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Triple Acrostic Etheree

Anesthesia

a no pain existence, simple in its total dark twilight, healing hush, calm as death extreme sense of sweet silence serene, no fear, no hate, painless ill conceived dreams without stimuli as (nine... eight... sev...) thoughts have eased (six...) I, aaa...
12/12/15
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Agrawal Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 2:25 AM
so nice james This is wonderful Can i use it for myself with regards Lokesh
Inman Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:15 AM
Thanks for the comment Lokesh.
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 5:24 PM
I see Caycay had been leaving you lovely comments. ISn't she an absolute dear??
Inman Avatar
January 3, 2016 at 8:58 PM
Absolutely, she is. Surprised to see you back on this one.
Godwin Avatar
January 1, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Very clever, not only the writing, but the formatting. Good to grin after reading your other 'emotional' writes. I have been thrilled by the words I found on your pages this night, James. Thank you for sharing and believe me, if I don't come back soon, it isn't intentional - I enjoy your talent ... CayCay (p.s. I have never seen a triple before - no easy feat / very impressive )
Inman Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:32 AM
You've said so many beautiful things to me, CayCay. You can't imagine how wonderful your comments have made me feel. Thank you.
Breidenthal Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 9:15 PM
Very interesting verse here as well, James..i like the line "extreme sense of sweet silence.." this poem speaks loud and powerfully to me. Always, Laura
Inman Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Laura. It was a challenging write.
Kendrick Avatar
December 29, 2015 at 3:51 PM
Something like this is not so easy to do..Wonderful job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Inman Avatar
January 2, 2016 at 9:27 AM
Thanks Sara. It took a while to complete.
Muideen Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 12:27 PM
A very lovely gem. I'm in awe........A.M.
Inman Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:49 AM
What a wonderful comment. Thank you Afolabi
Lindley Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 11:19 PM
A brilliantly creative piece James. I marvel at the time you put into this poem. Shows great talent,dedication and a truly awesome creative force! A7
Inman Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:48 AM
So kind of you Robert. Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 4:03 PM
by the way I just noticed you commented to many poems of mine Thanks so much. I wish I had time to look through yours but maybe I have seen them all? Let me know if I missed any, ok!!
Inman Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:47 AM
I love spending time with you.
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 4:00 PM
oh, I took a little while to get what you were doing on that last line and then I got it. BRILLIANT work. You are super creative with this etheree. You do the form very proud here, my friend!! I also showed this form today!!
Inman Avatar
December 18, 2015 at 8:46 AM
Thank you Andrea.
Andresen Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 1:44 PM
- Really talented, James !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 2:55 PM
Thank you Anne Lise.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 8:05 AM
James, very creative in the format.. =`) and of course the description.. enjoyed!~Olive Eloisa =`)
Inman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 9:54 AM
Thank you Olive, it was a challenge I set for myself and was really more about the form then the content (just to see if I could make it work). Thank you for visiting.
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