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Triple Acrostic Etheree

a no pain existence, simple in its total dark twilight, healing hush, calm as death extreme sense of sweet silence serene, no fear, no hate, painless ill conceived dreams without stimuli as (nine... eight... sev...) thoughts have eased (six...) I, aaa... 12/12/15

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Lokesh Agrawal

Date: 9/16/2016 2:25:00 AM

so nice james This is wonderful Can i use it for myself with regards Lokesh

James Inman
Date: 9/16/2016 9:15:00 AM

Thanks for the comment Lokesh.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/3/2016 5:24:00 PM

I see Caycay had been leaving you lovely comments. ISn't she an absolute dear??

James Inman
Date: 1/3/2016 8:58:00 PM

Absolutely, she is. Surprised to see you back on this one.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/1/2016 5:26:00 PM

Very clever, not only the writing, but the formatting. Good to grin after reading your other 'emotional' writes. I have been thrilled by the words I found on your pages this night, James. Thank you for sharing and believe me, if I don't come back soon, it isn't intentional - I enjoy your talent ... CayCay (p.s. I have never seen a triple before - no easy feat / very impressive )

James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 9:32:00 AM

You've said so many beautiful things to me, CayCay. You can't imagine how wonderful your comments have made me feel. Thank you.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/31/2015 9:15:00 PM

Very interesting verse here as well, James..i like the line "extreme sense of sweet silence.." this poem speaks loud and powerfully to me. Always, Laura

James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Laura. It was a challenging write.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2015 3:51:00 PM

Something like this is not so easy to do..Wonderful job..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

James Inman
Date: 1/2/2016 9:27:00 AM

Thanks Sara. It took a while to complete.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 12/17/2015 12:27:00 PM

A very lovely gem. I'm in awe........A.M.

James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 8:49:00 AM

What a wonderful comment. Thank you Afolabi

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/15/2015 11:19:00 PM

A brilliantly creative piece James. I marvel at the time you put into this poem. Shows great talent,dedication and a truly awesome creative force! A7

James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 8:48:00 AM

So kind of you Robert. Thank you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2015 4:03:00 PM

by the way I just noticed you commented to many poems of mine Thanks so much. I wish I had time to look through yours but maybe I have seen them all? Let me know if I missed any, ok!!

James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 8:47:00 AM

I love spending time with you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2015 4:00:00 PM

oh, I took a little while to get what you were doing on that last line and then I got it. BRILLIANT work. You are super creative with this etheree. You do the form very proud here, my friend!! I also showed this form today!!

James Inman
Date: 12/18/2015 8:46:00 AM

Thank you Andrea.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/15/2015 1:44:00 PM

- Really talented, James !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman
Date: 12/15/2015 2:55:00 PM

Thank you Anne Lise.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 12/15/2015 8:05:00 AM

James, very creative in the format.. =`) and of course the description.. enjoyed!~Olive Eloisa =`)

James Inman
Date: 12/15/2015 9:54:00 AM

Thank you Olive, it was a challenge I set for myself and was really more about the form then the content (just to see if I could make it work). Thank you for visiting.